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The protagonist, Tai Er, has no real character. Rather than being a Yin Tianzi, he is more like a bastard who can't run away when he sees a woman. He can't stand it. .

Yin Tianzi, practicing Chinese martial arts. . . Really, when I saw this, I couldn't complain anymore. It was as if Qiao Feng had switched from practicing the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon to practicing Taekwondo. Is this thing from the same dimension? . . .

First of all, even if their world is a normal world, Yin Tianzi is not something they can reach! The main character is written as if he has never seen a female character before? Is Yin Tianzi so cool?

Yin Tianzi, the Great Emperor of Beiyin Fengdu, no matter how others call him, he has to call him Emperor. How can anyone directly call him Yin Tianzi? God JB, when he met someone in the second dimension, the expression of the two-dimensional girl was so cute. I love you so much. Do you want to see what kind of character you wrote. Waste of time.

First understand what Yin Tianzi is, and then write about Fei Lu. Don't just understand that Yin Tianzi is the ruler of the underworld and just write it down casually.

She doesn't look cool, like a loser

The author has seen any time-travel novels that became popular. In the beginning, he revealed that he was a time-traveler. Don't tell him whether he is lying or not. Just don't tell him. Every time I see a pig's foot that reveals his origin, I feel stupid. You just told me your origin clearly without being asked. What's not stupid????

Has this male protagonist never seen a woman? When I see a woman, I look like a pig. I have never seen a woman before. This is it. Just react like a normal person, okay? This is exactly the same as that one who has never seen a girl before. When he sees a girl, he will fall in love once, and he will have epilepsy and lust. I don't even ask for Yin Tianzi's personality, but I just want him to have the personality of a normal person, okay? He's not even as good as a normal person.

I read reviews saying that the protagonist is not good enough. After reading the novel, I can only say that the book friend is right.

Author, you are not writing about Yin Tianzi at all, you are writing about an ordinary person's path to defeating monsters and upgrading! You wrote the reward talisman and I almost died laughing, hahaha. That's outrageous. You, the Lord of the Underworld, what use do you need this thing for? Originally, you could know roughly what you want by comparing it with the Emperor of the Earth, or you could learn from myths and stories. Soldiers and horses, weapons, laws, underworld, magic weapons, ghosts and gods, etc. To put it bluntly, what you want to write about is the underworld, not the world of heaven.