Detective Conan: I Text Yukiko from the Start

A master must go back and become a senior

The appearance of a dragon's head is really annoying, and I'm not in the mood to watch it.

You are a palmist son who traveled through time. You came here to force yourself to be patriotic, and you even believed you when you said you wanted to blow up the God's toilet. You are so innocent. The president of Country M came here and said to you, "I want to blow up the White House," and you just believe that he loves Zhong Guo?

You can still endure the poison in Chapter 45 before, but this is not how you come back, are you a pure elementary school student?

He also said that he was a dragon fruit man and the protagonist was so stunned that his DNA belonged to the Takahashi family. He also said that he, a dragon fruit man, was planning to arrange for himself to be sliced ​​and studied. The author had a trick in his mind. I thought **. Do you still want to tell others that I am a sakura-body dragon-fruit mess? If you add anything randomly, it will be a comprehensive comic. You added so many things and wrote it. Do you understand?

Your forty-five chapters and the next few chapters made me embarrassed. Does anyone really believe this kind of self-destruction? I'm afraid that after completing the mission, the protagonist will be settled by the Queen and thrown into jail, right? And the protagonist will provide money, technology and talents, and then completely manage it, leaving others to take care of themselves? It's impossible to be truly patriotic to this extent, right? Under normal circumstances, you would keep some portion for yourself and hand it over completely? It's hard not to make people feel that there is a conspiracy. The author, you wrote this paragraph too straightforwardly and idealistically. Not to mention that Yunyou will become his own person in the end. Nothing has even begun, and the protagonist has given away his belongings? What kind of love brain behavior is this? Moreover, the contents of these photos are also somewhat chronological. It seems that they are simply explained for the sake of explanation and foreshadowing. It is too straightforward, too deliberate, and really embarrassing.

From the first chapter, the protagonist has no nostalgia for his past life. He is happy and excited after being reborn as a master in his childhood. Coupled with the protagonist's identity after time travel, as long as he is not stupid, he will not do what he did in Chapter 45. I think if you want to write a fanfic, you should write it well. There is no need to give the protagonist a strong personality. Ninety-nine out of a hundred protagonists in time-travel novels are people who no longer remember their past lives. A person who no longer even remembers his past life is not the setting of "everyone" in the entire parallel world of love?

Looking so good, a dragon head suddenly appeared, and another protagonist came and wanted to blow up the toilet to prove that he was from the dragon country. It was really a bit overwhelming. The most awesome dragon head actually believed it.

The author has entered the factory. In what age is he still writing this kind of thing?

Other authors publish comprehensive comics, and American comics deliberately downplay the rabbit issue, but you are the better one, right? The writing is so poisonous, it is infinitely static, and it promotes development. It is poisonous to death.