
Luffy Died at Sea, and I Became the Sun God from the Start?
路飞出海死了,开局我成太阳神?
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 837k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
216Chapters
4.8MReads
193.7kFlowers
9.9Score
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I don't know if you have noticed when reading this kind of soul-traveling novels that these protagonists have the power to reshape their bodies and have never seen it done before. The most poisonous thing about such protagonists is the problem of heirs. What is born is not the protagonist himself, but the original body, because the protagonist's only soul is himself and nothing else. This is equivalent to working for the original body.
In a place where pirates are everywhere, do you think it is a good idea to establish a modern parliamentary system?
The author couldn't be Huang Chui, he was almost dead, and he almost killed Akainu. In the original Akainu resisted two attacks, he vomited blood and stood up like a normal person.
What do you say about this book? It's so simple and clear! Let's get straight to the point! How to describe it! It's like seeing a national goddess on the street, pushing her down on the street, getting her pregnant in public, having sex while holding up her pants, and not being responsible! It gives people a feeling of happiness. In the novels of this era, you are either a forced lailai or a mischievous eunuch. You are the only one who stands out! I don't know how many years ago I experienced this! I didn't expect to experience it again. This feeling is so cool! We bookworms would like to call you the strongest! This era should leave your name friends!
There is no need for the protagonist to call himself a pirate, right? The fourth condition of the system is to dominate the Grand Line, but it doesn't ask you to dominate the Grand Line as a pirate, right? Isn't it enough to consider yourself an adventurer? Or anything else. After all, the protagonist you wrote has a positive personality and behavior, and he will also launch a public trial. No matter how you look at it, he will be red. Why do you call yourself a thief? There is a sense of self-dwarfing here. If the world government is hostile to the protagonist and assigns him the identity of a pirate and demonizes him, it would be understandable. But the protagonist has not really emerged yet, so why not give him the identity of a pirate? Inappropriate? He is not Luffy who only knows One Piece in the original work.
The protagonist punched the Navy Headquarters with one punch. Some people couldn't understand the motive. Is it just to eliminate the active forces in advance? But by doing this, you are also pushing the navy completely towards the enemy. With one punch, the navy's 100,000 elite soldiers were killed and wounded countless people. I don't know how many people will hate the protagonist because of this. Not to mention the hawks in the navy, even the dove-like characters such as Zefa, He and Qingji will probably have an extremely bad impression of the protagonist. What are you trying to do? In fact, the positions of these characters and the World Government are not completely consistent. It can even be said to be contradictory. There should not be many people in the Navy who are really aligned with the World Government. They are all ** groups that can be united, but now they are completely destroyed with one punch. This is just one of them.
No matter how Oda draws or writes, Garp will always be a big fan of mine. Oda is a comic artist and he knows how to draw comics.
The protagonist's woman is like Nami Weiwei. Just give her a protective shield. Why do you want to trick everyone and train them to be strong? You have written Luffy as the protagonist. A combatant should do the work of a combatant, and a navigator should do the work of a navigator. There are no side effects per person. There is a natural type of fantasy beast, and there are six naval styles per person. The key is that you don't need to practice at all. You can reach the full level after eating it. It lowers the perception too much. Just let the protagonist do it alone. If everyone cheats, it is still a cheat that violates the setting of One Piece...
Now that you have become Luffy, don't use the name of your previous life anymore. It looks very awkward.
Luffy seems to have no shortage of height. He has a rubber physique. As long as he can return life, his height and shape can be changed at will. In short, if you cannot increase your strength after eating the height fruit, you will suffer from blood loss.