Villain: the First Sword at the Beginning, Kill Your Master First!

The three views are not correct, the male version of Xu Qin? ? ?

When someone asks you a question, what do you answer? Are you asking questions for others or are they asking questions for you? ? ? Take a good look at how other people write Q&A novels before you start writing.

Playing Rick, I seriously doubt that Rick will take the lead.

Let Tianjizi and the protagonist be together

Tianjizi is the daughter of Master Taiwei, right?

I have the general Titan who can kill Noah.

The world is a big place, why don't we use cars instead of planes?

Although the writing is very good, isn't this girl Zhu Xian?

Can't we update this one properly? Do we have to open both copies?

This chapter of yours is terribly short, at best it's just one sentence or one page

The author Gou has the guts to let go of the ban on labor and capital in your doomsday novel.

You want an old man to be the heroine's disciple? Have you forgotten what you said before? Let the heroine create a female cultivator without accepting male disciples. Fortunately, how many chapters have you passed? Let the heroine accept an old man in his seventies or eighties as her apprentice. . . . . The author is also a talented person, so he can't believe what he says? **, Don't watch anymore

I used to praise you for your good writing, but now what are you doing? At this speed, this book is going to be useless.

This book is very similar to Xia Xuan's. The protagonists of these books are the author's. I think Xia Xuan's is the best, but it's a pity that I didn't write it. I hope this one can be written. This is the dark villain. The other books are a little less interesting.

The further back you go, the less qualified the protagonist becomes. There's no point in pretending to be 13, just run away and that's it.

I just read it and discovered a flaw. The author said that Ahri is the largest company in the world, right? He has tons of money, right? Then why did he use 5% of his shares to do this wilderness survival reward? ? Is there something wrong with Ahri's brain? No matter what, it is impossible to give 5% as a reward. 0.5% Is a bit high. After all, every shareholder regards his shares as his fate. In a company like Ali, 10% of the shares can be regarded as a major shareholder. It is unrealistic to give 5% of the shares as a reward. I suggest the author change it!

Very well written and reflects reality ~ I support it ~

The others are finished and you are left with this one. You can still read it. It has not been updated yet and I am speechless.

Commentary on Chapter 12: Creatures from the Demonic World written by "National Sanctuary, I Refresh Monsters and Draw Cards to Take Off".