Metropolis: Me, the Male Villain?

Xiaowei's villain story is quite authentic. The protagonist is ruthless and resourceful. Unfortunately, he can't write cool stories. The heroine is handled quite poorly and the coolness is seriously lacking. This is too fatal in urban novels. Moreover, there is no good guide and training plot for the heroine. I think this is the reason why Xiao Wei's fantasy villain novel was overtaken by the Destiny Villain. I hope more work will be done on the heroine in the future.

Are you a villain? The previous introduction said you were a criminal. The Lord does harm to innocent people. It would be better if the main character of a book with erroneous views is dead.

What the hell did the author write? The protagonist ruins the family of others. Hehe. This beast is still the protagonist

Why should it, a Western setting, come to my Eastern setting to show off its power? ?

After reviewing Chapter 14, I realized that Zizhong was very scheming. He anticipated all Tang Long's possible thoughts in advance, and strangled the possibility of Tang Long escaping and asking for help from the outside world in advance, forcing Tang Long to go to the death route he had arranged. The plan seemed simple but actually calculated the people's hearts at every step. Tang Long, a dignified soldier, died in his hands. It was really not unfair. Should we say that Zizhong deserves to be born in a top family and received the most stringent heir education from an early age? Such characters can no longer be called human beings; they are the most perfect political animals.

Author, you are suitable for writing fantasy villain novels, not this kind of thing, so it's really a good idea to finish it early... Experience

I hope to accept fans like Lou Xiao'e, He Yuyu, the Yu sisters, and Ran Qiuye.

Among the protagonists coming out now, I like Li Wenli the most. He is the most selfless person. Even if he knows it is not good for himself, he will do it as long as it is beneficial to the group.

Can't you take Lin Qian'er away? Although it is a vase, she is someone else's fiancée after all.

Yes, it's not bad to write about Western fantasy. The dynasty system and the fantasy skills are replaced by the magic system.

What about the harem story that was promised? That's it?

When I first came to Feilu, the villain stories were pretty good, but now I just follow the trend or just follow the trend, and only the Colonel's is better. I didn't even feel anything about the Destiny Villain book after reading it.

Your book is almost exactly the same as the original TV series. Have you obtained the fan license? Be careful if Gu Man comes to sue you

The next chapter directly allows the protagonist to have sex with Lin Qian'er, and record a video and send it to the man named Fang. Wouldn't it be beautiful? Of course, Lin Qian'er cannot be taken away. After using it, he will either kill her or make her and the man named Fang sit in jail together.

Hanging a sheep's head and selling *meat! ! ! ! The name and content do not match at all! ! ! ! It's said to be a post-apocalyptic restaurant, and it also has the setting of traveling back and forth! ! ! ! What is an apocalyptic restaurant? It means opening a restaurant in the apocalypse! ! ! !

This finally happened so unexpectedly,

I like Liu Qingqing, and I have no resistance to smart and ambitious women. I also like Yun Qingling, who has a similar character in the author's previous book. However, I feel that the subsequent Xuannv is just average. I think Yun Qingling is the most suitable for Qin Ting. Can this book put Liu Qingqing in a position? I want to see more scenes between the male protagonist and Liu Qingqing.

How should I put it? Although it is a villain novel, I really don't like the character of the second lady of the Liu family, so I'd better get rid of it.

Can the male protagonist's emotional line be properly written? I feel that there are still too few female protagonists, the fake aunts have not appeared, and the male protagonist's wife is also unattractive. Anyway, I think the male protagonist's wife is not worthy of the male protagonist. When can I get a divorce?

I feel that killing Chu Luo is completely unnecessary. Even if everyone can activate psychic powers, the existence of class will not be eliminated, because everything has to pay a price, otherwise the drug to cure cancer will not be so easy to come on the market. Can those who enjoy the most top-notch resources be surpassed by civilians? As long as you control it in your hands, it is equivalent to controlling the spiritual evolution path of all mankind. Wouldn't it be more useful? Killing them directly would be too wasteful.

It's useless to write so many exercises. I didn't see any useful ones. Even Zi Nu's fire charm technique can't stop it. It's useless.

Zhou Zhiruo's appearance can confuse all living beings. Is the author a book reader?

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