Apocalypse: More Children, More Blessings, Building a Clan in the Apocalypse

What I hate most about post-apocalyptic novels is all the moral boundaries. Even though you can get anything you want simply by being strong, they insist on setting boundaries for themselves, spouting nice words about preserving humanity. Ha! If this guy wasn't the protagonist, he'd be dead already. If he likes being a hero, why doesn't he write martial arts novels?

This is Feilu! Author, what kind of garbage are you writing? It's clearly well-written! Why do you have to add these toxic elements? Being seen naked by others? Married women and young wives might be okay with that! But this is Feilu! Aren't you disgusted by being seen naked? I understand if you want to write something realistic! But this is Feilu! Aren't you deliberately trying to annoy me?

While novels are meant to be enjoyable, I still want to criticize some of the comments. Even in peacetime, it's hard to find so many women who are both beautiful and virgins, let alone in a post-apocalyptic world. It might be plausible at the very beginning of the apocalypse, but as time goes on, the longer the apocalypse lasts, the lower the probability of beautiful women being virgins.

Bringing along dependents is fine, since it's a "the more children, the better" system. But if they're unhappy, they can shoot the protagonist. So, if they suddenly get annoyed while fighting high-level zombies, can they just snipe them again? This kind of unreliable companion makes me feel like it's time to kill them.

You're trying to bring up reality with this fast-paced, action-packed novel? Anyone who didn't know better would think you were writing a masterpiece of realism. Your fast-paced, action-packed novel is enjoyable to read, not using reality as an excuse to create a bunch of clichés. If you're going to bring up reality, why bother revising it? Why change the scene where the female lead is forced?

Wow, the author actually likes being a green-haired turtle? Amazing!

What I want to say is that instead of spending 24/7 monitoring the book review section to "fight back" negative comments, you should think about how to revise the story. Let's not even talk about before the revisions; there are three female characters now. Two of them were tied up and sexually assaulted. On Feilu, who isn't just looking for a lighthearted read?

The position of the principal wife should ideally belong to a virgin, beautiful, and capable woman. A woman who has been married before, with her inherent disadvantages, will find it difficult to win the respect of other women, leading to instability and gossip within the household. How can someone who isn't beautiful be pleasing to the eye and maintain a respectable image in public?

Why does the author believe that married women can help the protagonist stabilize his harem and harmonize relationships between sisters? Does this make sense? Do sensible and intelligent women necessarily have to be married women?

Imperfections are acceptable, but this is FL (Flash Literature). Imperfections are unacceptable. If you write it, you have to accept the fact that the results will be poor. And, frankly, the forced rape setting is incredibly disturbing—far more disturbing than the married woman setting. Married women are one thing, but forced rape is downright horrible.