I Created the Holy Grail War and Shocked the World!

After reading this book for so long, I can say with certainty that the combat power of this book has completely collapsed. The author only considers the heroic spirit servants he is writing, and has not considered the internal positioning of different heroic spirit forces at all.

I don't object to the author boasting about the heroic spirit of the second design, but you should at least write down his high combat performance after the second design. It's outrageous to see the author making nonsense about the Evil God D in Spiderman and seeing the performance of the servants. It's outrageous. Author, the main god you set is close to the level of a star explosion. Even if the heroic spirit itself is different, how can it be compared to the Evil God D?

You are really awesome. This book is worth more than 2 million yuan. Readers have spent so much money just to wait for your ending. You are worth more than 2 million yuan. Serve

It is known that he has traveled through time to become a stupid pillar, but he still has to take advantage of the widow. Why is he suddenly unable to bear it and becomes interested in pregnant women? This male protagonist has forgotten how he traveled through time and deserves to be killed.

I feel that the author's combat power setting is too low. Adding other world's combat power cannot suppress it and can only forcibly suppress the concept of mystery to increase the combat power of the magic system. However, the combat power performance is too high, giving people a feeling of chaotic combat power.

The description of the main character's appearance is really weird. It gives me the feeling of dreaming back to more than ten years ago. It's not like the description in this kind of novel at all. It's more like a fantasy novel, and it feels quite meaningless. It has a sense of fantasy and Western magic, and the description of the actual function of the sword in the stone in the real world is even more bizarre. It is written entirely in the style of a fantasy novel, which makes people feel ashamed. Moreover, the moon-shaped world does not seem to have a fixed setting that human beings will inevitably perish. The land of steel and the coral of the moon are only two of the possibilities, and everything will die, which is nothing more than the appearance of different endings.

Why come to Feilu if you don't have a harem?

Delete this scene with the leading role. I really don't want to order it anymore.

I don't know why I feel more and more bored later on.

I can understand that An Yilun has been persecuted because of his bad reputation. Although I think he is not good, he is not as bad as everyone says. However, there are a lot of protagonists to choose from. There is no need to choose one with many good ones. But Ying Lili It's almost the same. She's not much better than An Yilun. I can only say that she and An Yilun are evenly matched. I don't know why there are so many female protagonists who don't insist on getting involved with her. With all the backgrounds, talents, and characters, it's impossible to pick out one that is particularly surprising, okay? And he especially likes to feel wronged for her. He tries to explain how innocent she is and it's all because An Yilun is wrong. This level of whitewashing can be said to be like kneeling down and licking Ying Lili.

I'll be considered a bitch if I order your book again in the future.

The scene is indeed beautifully written, but there are too many cuts. The opening of the Noble Phantasm without chanting is a flaw, and the B-frame is missing.

Although the author wrote a big scene, I really didn't see how powerful he made the magic system. Even in the old days, it couldn't achieve the starburst. He completely weakened other characters like the Dragon Maid and the Sword Master to advance the plot.

It's such a loss of character. If you feel that your grades are not good and you don't want to write, just come to a rough ending and finish it. If you don't want to write, you will procrastinate. The eunuch waited once and came again the second time. He no longer wanted to wait.

To be honest, I feel like the biggest lie in the Holy Grail War is that the Servant is a high-level familiar. If you don't believe it, you can think about the fate of the two masters, Winky and Mother C. They basically ended up being stabbed in the back. Therefore, most of the time, it is not about whether you want a Servant, but whether the Servant wants you. Don't just think that you can deal with Servants as long as you have a Command Spell. For some high-level Servants, as long as they have sufficient magic power and resistance to magic power, even three strokes of the Command Spell can't do anything to them. Of course, apart from those Aozaki Oranges, Two Ritual and Shajo Love Song, there are a few other exceptions.

If you're still struggling, if it doesn't work, just change it to a smaller one and open another one. After all, your EVA writing... I guess no one will subscribe again after reading this.

In my bones, I still have the flavor of writing fantasy novels, talking about magic and Xingyue. To be honest, after reading the Buffalo book, I read this one again. The taste is too strong.

Isn't his appearance inferior to that of Li Qiushui? Do you mean to compare appearance with Li Qiushui? Comparing appearance with women, are you Cai Xukun?

A Hunyuan Da Luo Jinxian has to go to Yanjing to kill people. At first, it is said that Hunyuan Da Luo Jinxian looks very cool. The more you describe it, the more people think that your Hunyuan Da Luo Jinxian is made of plastic, right? You directly say that you are the Great Dao, and you can break a mortal cup. It is really terrifying.

I dared to go to the battlefield even though I just traveled through the past. How dare the author write about the courage Liang Jingru gave to the author? It's better to be killed in the graduation examination and the whole drama ends, saving some face

Why don't you let me see you? Fei Lu, you seem to have a serious illness.

In the original work, the sacrifice has been divorced from the world view, and time, space and cause and effect cannot interfere. There is no need for the protagonist to protect the weak Three Heavenly Emperors. Who can kill them in the Shetian Trilogy? It is simply ridiculous.

I read a little bit and felt a little confused. It's actually better not to have the protagonist. I put the protagonist in. It seems a little stiff and a little embarrassing. For people like us who have read the original work, it's really a bit... Personal opinion

The author's dialogue is so confusing that you don't even know who is speaking in a row of dialogue. I feel so tired looking at the back

After reading this chapter, I think the house Pigfoot should go to is Slytherin instead of Ravenclaw.

Why is Roselle original? Why can't I find it?

To be honest, let me tell you one thing, the author's subject matter is good, but it feels weird.

This is a male-channeled novel. If it were a female-channelled novel, it should be about Lin Wanwan. Think about it, a woman fell in love with a bully, and even died for the bully. Wait until the person inside the shell is replaced before turning on the scum-crushing mode. It will be fun all the way to the end!

So in the author's eyes, sissies are considered good-looking.

In the first chapter, December 15th is followed by December 2nd. What kind of joke is this? I don't understand it at all. Isn't it possible? Is there such a big generation gap between me, a post-95 generation, and the world?