Keeping a Diary in The Ultimate, Lei Ting and Yun Han Are Losing It
人在终极写日记，雷婷云寒坏掉了
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- Ongoing
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- 135k Words
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- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
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- Faloo
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All-time: Reads, Flowers.
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Reader comments 16
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Cai Yunhan, the Ultimate One, has so much strength, let alone Cai Yunhan, the Ultimate Three. Even if there is pressure from the plot, his combat power will not be less than 10,000 in more than ten years. His talent is not bad in the first place, and he will not be less than 10,000 no matter what. You cannot check the information before writing a novel, even if you search for the combat power of Cai Yunhan, the Ultimate Three.
The timing is wrong and the logic doesn't match. When Lei Ting is kidnapped, she thinks of the protagonist first? Why don't you do it yourself first? I have only met the protagonist a few times, and I have never seen his strength. Cai Yunhan became the class teacher at this time? I mentioned earlier that there was news that Wang Dadong was coming, but then you just said that he has been coming for a while?
After Ye Sixian arrives in Golden Time and Space, look for the powerful pills that Black Dragon made with essence. Cai Yunhan must have joined the final class after Tian Xin ran away, and his combat power must have exceeded 10,000. No. 7 On the KO list. This is a college list. How can I still be on the list when I'm a teacher?
The protagonist won't just be in the diary, right?
I suggest you don't write it. Cai Yunhan and Wang Dadong are classmates. How can they not know about him? Moreover, at the beginning of the story, Lei Ting didn't know about Iron Time and Space.
Tsk, it should be said that this second creation is not very good. The Fenghou Qimen is very good. The key is that if you don't show the combat power points, there will be no soul. And then even the Ah Zha* can reach over 10,000 points. It is really weird. If you write the combat power like the final series, it will start directly with one million points. . . In fact, if you want to write the ultimate series you want, you can slightly change it or you can change it to get a good combat system. Otherwise, as you are writing now, the protagonist has no combat power and the result is that the protagonist is like a semi-invincible NPC. It doesn't make people blend into other games and make people feel, oh, it's so wonderful and awesome, instead of just starting the Ultimate Diary series like now, acting like a gangster and destroying the combat power system.
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