I'm Really Not Li Xingyun

Li Xingyun let the bad guys down so much, I get annoyed every time I watch it. Although I also understand Li Xingyun's idea of ​​​​wanting to be a idle cloud and wild crane, it has to be realistic. He also doesn't think about the situation at that time. He was idle. So many bad guys died later, and he became the target of thousands of people. Doesn't Li Xingyun regret it at all?

If what you did is attributed to the Peace Messenger Zhen Li Xingyun, that would be a **

The plot is really good, but the emotional scenes are really not pleasing to the eye. It's pulled back and forth. The male protagonist is a strong one, but the relationship aspect is really hard to describe. He keeps showing that I love the empress only and that my heart is completely occupied by the empress. And then I can't make up my mind to reject other girls. It gives people a sense of authority and authority. I feel like, don't you want to be an emperor? It's not normal for an emperor to have three palaces and six courtyards. He doesn't dare to face his feelings head-on. If he likes it, he likes it, and if he doesn't like it, he rejects it. Moreover, the empress written by the author doesn't seem to object to the male protagonist having a harem. It's really hard for the male protagonist to put aside his pretentiousness. It makes me feel sick to my stomach. What about the Asasi male protagonist?

Yuan Tiangang must be killed. If the protagonist is Li Xingyun, then it is best for Yuan Tiangang to be alive. But if the protagonist is someone else, Yuan Tiangang must die, otherwise, he will either die or become a *

If you can't write emotional scenes, don't write them. The portrayal in this aspect is too toxic. He successfully shaped the male protagonist into an upright and upright woman, timid and timid, constantly emphasizing that the only one he really likes is the empress, and then he doesn't refuse or make it clear to anyone else. After provoking someone, they talked about letting nature take its course and whether it was poisonous or not. No matter how many heroines there are, don't write the protagonists in such a** way

Well written, this is one of the best fanfics about bad people I have ever read.

Haven't you returned to the bad guy plot yet? I skipped it if I haven't watched Soul Lord.

Dear author, I think you can add some lovable character settings of the Spirit Master, but you don't have to put them all in this book.

Damn, I don't recommend you write about spirit masters. It's not about anything else. The main reason is that the bad guys are still martial arts, but the spirit masters are completely fantasy. The power system is too different.

I took a look at it before, and it seems that the bad guy and the spirit master have different settings. I hope the author doesn't write too much later.