Honkai Impact: Top Ten Tear-Jerking Scenes at the Beginning!

Dude, you are awesome. You were the last among several girlfriends to drink this bowl of soup, and you also chose Liu Ying, whose current living situation is the most unstable. Forget it, brother, just write it. If it's good, I'll treat it as the official setting. Your seniors have helped you avoid almost all pitfalls that you can step into. Just read and write it yourself and see what opinions are in the comment area.

You don't take your own life seriously at all. It's foggy. What happened to your Fengfeng Fruit? Wouldn't it be blown away by a strong wind?

You can consider developing a solo line with Conan. It would be very interesting to use Moriarty to create obstacles for Conan.

? Brother, please read more of the plot and I'll read a few chapters. ** Chun Chun's writing is terrible and there are too many MD lines.

But screw you. I can tolerate adding so many irrelevant things, things that interfere with the flow of the plot, just follow the video and add some detailed descriptions, but you can't do it just like this. . . .

Take my advice and find a job in a factory.

With all due respect, in Feilu, you can type vertical and horizontal words without symbols in between. There are no more than five in Feilu, and they are all the big guys among the big guys.

The characters of Genshin Impact have been changed in a mess (?_?)

Author, you are really stupid. If you are doing this, who will give you tickets and flowers? Sooner or later, you will die.

The problem is too big. The writing power is normal, but the plot arrangement is unreasonable. Please read more similar books. What is this? There are a lot of Genshin Impact Breaking Iron books, which makes me look like the original skin.

Can't you just write according to that video? Why add so many scenes? Don't you know that there is a saying that without comparison, there is no difference?

It's really good, and it also adds a lot of plot twists that the original plot didn't have.

How about a scene like this?

If you haven't read it, don't write it,**

It's not bad to catch up, let's take a look

I think most people came to see the author do HS. I have no impression of killing with a single blow with a broken knife. As for the prop flow and so on, the chapters have not passed 100. Unless it is a semi-invincible flow at the beginning and arranges all kinds of cheats for the protagonist to kill everyone, otherwise it will be slow and slow. The most regrettable thing here is that I did not use the little Death Note to kill those religious lunatics one by one. What a pity.

Tnl has GB and is easy to write. Except for what Apokalis said, it's all nm Mr. Yang's.

Update, I declare with my 10 years of book experience, keep the quality, it will definitely be popular