Konoha: Comparing the Two Narutos, Hinata Is Extremely Happy

Those who read this novel are all Japanese devils

The author, I want to see Kuroming go to the moon and Kaguya Otsutsuki to make her fall in love, and then marry Kaguya. I want to see the reaction of Kaguya Hamura Hagoromo and others in the world of Baiming. I am looking forward to it. Hahaha, the genes of children born from two people with the strongest blood are stronger.

Who has watched Bai Ming grow up, but you focus on writing about Bai Ming. Anyway, Hei Ming writes very little. The most speechless thing is that Bai Ming can be rewarded, but Black Ming is not. The focus was wrong at the beginning, and then this kind of comparison video does not make one side of the movie-watching stream rewarded and the other not. Can you tell me what is called fairness? Originally, at the beginning of your book, you should use more ink to describe Hei Ming. As for Bai Ming, everyone has read it. You should finish it in a concise way. You use too much ink to write about Bai Ming. So why should I read this fanfic of yours? I can just go to the original manga. I have written a few books on your homepage. It doesn't matter. He is an experienced author, but his writing style is still the same as that of a newbie. You didn't understand the key points of the book at the beginning, and used too much pen and ink to write about what the readers know, and then used very little pen and ink to write about what the readers don't know. I hope the author will know this problem and change it in the future.

The front is okay, but the back is not good. It should be written that Naruto's character was modified by Asura. After all, Naruto has the same character concept as the first generation, and they are almost the same as their ancestors. Naruto is like a psycho, a holy mother, very hypocritical, and he doesn't do what he says. Anyway, he just says that people need to understand each other to be peaceful, but I will definitely do what I promise, you believe me, and I will do what I say is my nindo. In terms of action, although I understand you, I don't know how to change it. Konoha can beat you, but you can't beat Konoha. You need to understand Konoha. If you understand Konoha, you will understand each other.

Can anyone explain it to me? I see that many one-person Zhu Tianwen basically collects the Eight Wonders By the way, is the Eight Magic Skills that good? It's really powerful in terms of power, but it also has many side effects. Just like the Feng Hou Qi Sect, people who don't understand it will go crazy. The Eight Magic Techniques feel to me like a quick version of the sword technique to ward off evil spirits. It's not as good as the Golden Light Curse and Thunder Technique, and it won't do any harm if you practice it peacefully. Like the Taoist dual cultivation of life and life, the Eight Magic Techniques don't have this feeling of dual cultivation of life and life. My opinion is for reference only.

It would be good if Bai Ming took over the lead writer Hei Ming in one stroke

It's ten meters long and eight meters wide. You actually told me that the interior is 100 square meters... The interior is bigger than the outer shell.

In other words, this book has a low sense of immersion, and there is no main point of view. The whole process is for Aboriginal people to watch the movie, so you have to think about it yourself.

Author, you can write something about Hinata being a big eater. During the Ichiraku Ramen Big Eater competition, Hinata was able to eat better than Akimichi Choji. He ate 46 bowls and if the time had not expired, I think he could eat more. Let Hinata Hizashi know that his daughter has never had enough to eat.

Dear author, will you accept Sarah in the future? I really like this character

Let's just say it was sold for 300 billion... It really belongs to you! Do you know how much money there is in the treasury now? Four trillion! Do you know how many RMB there are in the world? Thirty-seven trillion! Feeling: You alone own all the RMB in the world? Just talk about how much money you want? If you just go out and wander around without checking things, I'm afraid you're crazy because of poverty.

Sarutobi Hiruzen actually calls Madara uncle

Hei Zhen's Noble Phantasm is Roar, my wrath.

Is there no logic at all in writing fan fiction? It is most basic for people who are reincarnated by Tu Shan to renew their relationship and not change their names, and Tu Shan pays attention to every individual who reincarnates and renews their relationship. Why does Tu Shan Rongrong suspect that the protagonist is the reincarnation of Dongfang Yue Yue?

I hope the author will be faster! Like it very much!

What kind of coin is this?

Anna is a character who appeared in that chapter. Why did she appear before Jian introduced her?

Why are the styles of the front and back different? Is it written by two people? When I took stock of the mythical world, I also included the Four Beauties of Mythology, Changed Tragedy, but now I don't include any of them. They only take inventory after the tragedy has happened. We are not here to purely take stock, but to see the changes in tragedy. When we see the new chapter, we take stock of Xiao Li's flying knives. It's another one. Lin Shiyin has been sent away, and all the girls are deeply in love with that scumbag. At this time, even if they know the true face of Gou Li Xunhuan, but the tragedy has already happened, what's the use? I thought I could see an inventory of how to change the tragedy, but I didn't expect that it would still be the same as those pure nonsense novels in the past, which can only make people angry watching the original tragedy.

Chapter 39, Wanda still doesn't know magic, what is the protagonist thinking?

I vomited. After chapter 40, I was completely wrong.

As soon as he woke up, he realized that he had been asleep for 36 years? ? ? So awesome,

I've been watching this Zhidong Fatty checking something since 1.1, And I'm unhappy.

My mind is not good. After so much experience, my mind is still so poor.

So what does collapse mean?

Anyway, it's good to write, don't write it badly

My child, you have to believe me that only plants will protect you, zombies will only eat your brains.

The protagonist looks nothing like someone in their twenties

Actually, I think you either don't want to write the realm clearly, because overturning is very common in the world, or you write the protagonist's skills better. Of course, these are just my suggestions. Just take a look, there is no harm.

Well, I was shocked Thought it was updated?

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