Honkai Impact: the Original Stigmata at the Beginning, My Destiny Martial God

It's actually an old version of the plot, can you grasp it? MiHoYo himself couldn't control the rewrite.

You can learn from the setting of the super battleship in Roar of Steel, double decks, men's love, cannons, love is only found in giant ships. As the old saying goes, the truth is only within the range of cannons.

Your writing is amazing, is the fanfic a bit eunuch? You can do what others write about the topic, so why can't you do this? You have a psychological reaction, are you doing this? Are you a hydrologist? Are you writing about human nature? You are not good at writing about human nature. You are slow to become so enthusiastic, right? You let others read it, and we all have to leave. Look at the Superman fanfic written by others, and do what you say. Look, what you wrote is nothing. What you wrote, you said you cleaned it up early in the morning, but you didn't clean it up at all. You, you still wrote about the protagonist. Is the character you wrote a scientific research type or a protagonist type? Look at the rhythm of other people's writing, tell me it's tight. Your rhythm isn't tight at all. You said you're going to liquidate it, but you're not liquidating it. You said that these doomsday things haven't even ended after I've read them. You're so damn good at just one word. You're, damn, refunding your money.

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