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Why do you have to write this kind of plot when you travel through the super-god universe? Wouldn't it be possible to start the game normally if family members died in various ways or if Liu Chuang attacked his own sister or younger sister in various ways?

Flotation is completely written as a ungrateful character. He keeps stirring up trouble. Even the naughty kid who still wanted to stir up trouble was punished. It feels a bit much.

The protagonist becomes more and more obscene as you go to the end. The first part was not well written, so why does the style completely change in the later part? I'm speechless.

Although he is finished, I still have to complain that I was really poisoned. Author, I can understand that you are a straight man. But there is a difference between a straight man and a fool. Anyone with a clear eye can see it. The webmaster fell in love with the protagonist. How did you write the protagonist?

This begins a life of sin!

The writing feels like the main character is taking his time, which makes it uncomfortable to read. It's too wordy.

As for Guang Yuanshen, the power system is a bit small. Can you add some Beng San skills? For example, it can be opened from a treasure chest, @author, please??????

If you don't play music when everything is moving, you won't lose your soul.

You are already a Saiyan bloodline, so don't lose your fighting power.

The blackness in the book... Is really awesome! After all, this is a factory involved in the military industry, and it doesn't even have a guard!

You can basically tell a person's quality just by reading the profile, which is no different from a bandit's logo.

Is it really okay for the protagonist to offend people everywhere? And the one who offended the powerful forces was simply seeking death! So brainless! **.

Why did it end so suddenly? (You don't want that kind of thing.)

Can any of you netizens recommend a few novels like this one where the protagonist wears a vest everywhere? Thank you so much!

看都市独仙养些妖怪全世界搞事。结果就这？整天网络直播一大堆。都是这种没格局的水文一大堆！

I just want to say, what a sabi novel

The only thing I can say about the author is that you are short and weak. It's probably not as thick as a tardigrade's hair.

Now I'm 37, the universe is over, and I'm crazy long*

It's really cool to write about Hiyori

What's the water like in these chapters?

What the fuck are you writing? Are you saying that the country is a waste and that you let people go after betraying one of their own? Unable to protect people?

Don't die suddenly if you open two author accounts for one person.

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