Elf: I, the Strongest Champion, Join the Chat Group

It's very confusing and confusing. The protagonist suddenly has a high-tech night suit? Thefts are also mentioned in one sentence. Not to mention each theft in detail, at least write two.

Don't have a gray beard, it will make you sick

Nine out of ten times it's a conversation

Is that a sand sculpture? Perverted slut

This book is well written, but it takes too many tears.

When will the protagonist be able to become stronger on his own? I feel like it's better to master his own power.

Half of the chapter is meaningless chat text, which has little effect on advancing the plot. It is just hard water, and it is still like this after it is put on the shelves. The text is piled up with word count. I personally feel that it is no different from cheating money.

You're going a little too far. How many chapters have you spent defeating stragglers? ? You're typing hundreds of thousands of words in the chat, right? ?

It's all chatting nonsense, too much and I just want to experience it

It's so annoying, forget it **chapter water chat**, you still write the chapter like this, it's still 6, and you are not only watery, but the character is also twisted and fragmented, I am really speechless.

The latest version of Demon Slayer is full of success. The rest are all dialogues and interactions, but to be honest, the dialogues written by this author are quite interesting. I don't object to having more dialogues, but since I want more dialogues, shouldn't the plot be simpler and crush it with an invincible attitude? Only in this way can we ensure that there are both laughs and excitement, instead of the protagonist being so invincible, and ending up with such a huge battle to destroy Team Rocket, and in the end not even the hair on the wooden board was visible, the same principle of skirmishers, but it is not a single world view, there are so many things that can be written, it is really uncomfortable to keep watching.

You have so many weapons and so many bases, can a few thousand people defend it? After so long, there are still less than 10,000 people. What's the use of your time traveler plus system?

It's too boring. Just saving a girl and chatting in the ** took most of it. Saving people actually adds up to one chapter.

**, You also touched me, Princess Sissi? Have you ever respected historical figures?

What the hell is Wang Hao in Chapter 79?

Let me not talk about the writing style first. Now I'm reading chapter 46. It's a bit outrageous that the entry belongs to the setting where talent and technology are confused. Panels without subdivisions are very uncomfortable to look at. Especially the ones written in Feilu are all cool. The main character's attributes and performance don't quite match up. Upgrading entries means improving quality. Lingbo Weibu, which is normally the highest quality entry, For low quality, it is not appropriate to call it Lingbo Weibu. What improves is vocabulary proficiency. Then it should be broken down into technical actions. Furthermore, it is difficult to match the improved attributes of entries. Or as far as Lingbo Weibu is concerned, For those who are not familiar with this stuff, go watch Demi-Gods and the Eight Parts. The first thing that supports this technology should be movement speed and balance. Going backwards are burst, reaction speed, off-ball speed, Speed with the ball, control of the ball, and finally dribbling. It is written in a simple language and requires readers to understand it, which is already very difficult. But you also need to change everyone's cognitive settings. All I can say is that this book is a little bit cerebral and makes my head hurt when I read it.

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