
Elf: the Beginning of the Game
精灵:开局神潜黑心棉
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 805k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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5.7MReads
126.2kFlowers
9.9 · 3.6kScore
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You didn't write about the essence of Pokémon! Give it to whomever you say you want to give it to? Who are you? Don't say that you are just a first-level god's pet, even if you are a hunchback, your father is not easy to control! If it's really like what you wrote, what do those who cared about mythical beasts for their masters say? Isn't the essence of Pokémon just that no matter you are human or ghost, good or bad, I will always be with you?
It would be better to change the protagonist to 14 years old! Can an 8-year-old push three wheels?
Lu Xun said: When the suona blows, a white scarf wraps the head, and the hearse drifts and black people carry the coffin.
The Zhu family directly uses elves to attack the main character. Is this an attempted murder? Just let it go? Killing people in public and robbing elves, or mini dragons, without directly entering the game?
It was written well before, but why did it end up like this later? I promised to trust the heroine and her mother, but the result was good. I showed it to her and spread it directly. What is the protagonist's current strength? What if the evil organization knew about the protagonist's abilities and didn't capture him to study? Did the author think about this issue when he wrote it?
Writing history without understanding history? Because the literati in the early Ming Dynasty looked down on Zhu Yuanzhang, and some still missed the Northern Yuan Dynasty, the imperial examination was suspended for ten years in the sixth year of Hongwu. It was not until the seventeenth year of Hongwu that the imperial examination was reopened, and then became custom-made. Where did the imperial examination come from in the twelfth year of Hongwu? Adaptation is not random fabrication, drama is not nonsense, you are directly tampering with history.
It feels like the supporting characters have all been seriously de-intellectualized. In a world where elf research is basically the same, don't you know that Hackron can control the weather? Even if the quasi-god is rare, the main character won't be the only one, and if the opponent has ice-type skills, it's a bit illogical to use the method of praying for rain.
I just finished reading Chapter 16 and didn't want to read any more. I'm curious, when did quantity outweigh quality? For example, the Star God can give an order to destroy ten or even hundreds of galaxies. That is also the power given by the Star God. You, who only have the power to destroy galaxies, want to compete with the weakest Star God? You have lost your mind and gone crazy. No matter how weak the weakest star god is, he is still a star god and his power is more than that. What do you think?
Under one person? Spirit cage? Five, six, seven? I'm not saying they are not good-looking, but the recent years can't really be said to be our childhood.
If he is too strong, why should he support the protagonist? He is powerful and will not pay attention to the protagonist. This is just right. His strength can help the protagonist deal with a lot of troubles, and he doesn't know how to handle the protagonist. Then I deliberately set him to be a young man, and his talent is good. He has a king-level elf, so that the mud will not hold up the wall. If the protagonist leaks a little bit of soup, his strength will rise. Then he will be assigned the position of a gym leader, who can help the protagonist deal with a lot of things. Moreover, he is young and can think openly. When the protagonist surpasses him in strength, it will not be difficult for him to accept it, and he can be willing to listen to the protagonist's arrangements.
It is not a good thing for a world to have too many elves who are King of Champions or above and highly qualified elves. If these appear, the protagonist must train them all. If you don't want them, don't have so many.
If there is no team on the shelves, just leave
What the hell are you writing? The preface doesn't match the afterword. I forgot to write the next chapter again.
You can get on the bus as well as others. I might as well go see Huang Shushu
I chased him from the beginning to now, I ran away, and when I saw Yan, I couldn't walk. The protagonist went to kill a demon who was still in the water after so much water. Wasn't a **** who was about to become a god destroyed with just one move? ? ? Three generations of gods have been killed in one move, and now I haven't even seen a person who hasn't become a god yet for a long time.
The most important thing in Pokémon fandom is the bond between the Pokémon and their trainers. Gym battles and championships are important, but they are not everything. Giving away Pokémon is even more toxic. Have you considered the Pokémon's feelings?
Some people say that the protagonist sends elves as goods. You can read Chapter 139 about this. Yan Yan can't conquer the championship-level elves, and others dislike him. The elves that the protagonist brings back will not respect themselves as the trainers. If it doesn't work, it's fine to stay in our own secret realm. Moreover, many of the silly things are given by elves from others, and they treat elves as goods? The elf is not a fool. If he is willing to score goals, he must be a recognized trainer. I can't write the protagonist for every elf and ask for opinions, right?
After coming to Chouguo, I have been repeatedly catching elves and giving them away. Then I got timid and timid. Although I have ordered all of them so far, I really don't want to read any more.
Do I still need to redeem my voice proficiency? I'm afraid you forgot what superpower you set. . You don't even pay attention to your own settings. Really profitable
Fei* There are so many protagonists who are Uchiha. If there is a protagonist who is an Uchiha ancestor, hehe~
Chapter 199 was published twice in one article, turning a small article worth less than 2,000 yuan into a large chapter worth less than 4,000 yuan.
I would like to ask, which elves will the protagonist probably collect?
To be honest, what does An Yilun say about making the best galagame picture? Money or fame?
Is your update speed suitable for Feilu?
Once you see these names, you won't have the desire to read any more.
If you could only choose three, which three would you choose? 1: IQ increased by 100% 2: The art of rejuvenation 3: You can become invisible, walk through walls, burrow under the ground, fly, and have a god-level mind at will. Spiritual teleportation, through the door, god-level healing, god-level telekinesis, god-level spiritual sealing Locking Technique, God-Level Gene Blocking Technique 4: You won't get sick, and your body will be strengthened comprehensively. 5: You can completely and unlimitedly reshape your body at will 6: Five supernatural powers, the language of all things 7: God-level reincarnation power, memory retention, reincarnation of your choice 8: God-level disguise, god-level hacking technology, god-level psychology, god-level Cui Mian technique 9: Chaos level world bead 10: Predict the next seven days 11: God-level danger perception, God-level eyesight 12: Immortality and eternal life 13: Infinite Devouring Evolution of God-level Magical Powers 14: Infinite clones of divine powers 15: Reply 66 and like it to get the above abilities
Wasn't there an elf egg found under Xerneas in the Secret Land of West Lake? Did the author forget it?
Can't you update these days, author?
What about the other one? Why did he disappear? He only appeared for a short time. I don't know if there are a thousand words.
Why is there so much wisdom in the book review section? If you don't want to read it, just don't read it. How unhappy are you in life that you still come to the book review section to find a sense of presence? There are so many novels in Feilu. Which one can't be read? Where is your Bibini code?