Pokemon: Starting with the Hidden Ability Black-Hearted Cotton
精灵：开局神潜黑心棉
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 805k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
262Chapters
5.7MReads
126.2kFlowers
9.9Score
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Reader comments 50
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You didn't write about the essence of Pokémon! Give it to whomever you say you want to give it to? Who are you? Don't say that you are just a first-level god's pet, even if you are a hunchback, your father is not easy to control! If it's really like what you wrote, what do those who cared about mythical beasts for their masters say? Isn't the essence of Pokémon just that no matter you are human or ghost, good or bad, I will always be with you?
It was written well before, but why did it end up like this later? I promised to trust the heroine and her mother, but the result was good. I showed it to her and spread it directly. What is the protagonist's current strength? What if the evil organization knew about the protagonist's abilities and didn't capture him to study? Did the author think about this issue when he wrote it?
The Zhu family directly uses elves to attack the main character. Is this an attempted murder? Just let it go? Killing people in public and robbing elves, or mini dragons, without directly entering the game?
The classic opening of school belle plus taunting, you don't know any other routines, right?
It feels like the supporting characters have all been seriously de-intellectualized. In a world where elf research is basically the same, don't you know that Hackron can control the weather? Even if the quasi-god is rare, the main character won't be the only one, and if the opponent has ice-type skills, it's a bit illogical to use the method of praying for rain.
It is not a good thing for a world to have too many elves who are King of Champions or above and highly qualified elves. If these appear, the protagonist must train them all. If you don't want them, don't have so many.
If he is too strong, why should he support the protagonist? He is powerful and will not pay attention to the protagonist. This is just right. His strength can help the protagonist deal with a lot of troubles, and he doesn't know how to handle the protagonist. Then I deliberately set him to be a young man, and his talent is good. He has a king-level elf, so that the mud will not hold up the wall. If the protagonist leaks a little bit of soup, his strength will rise. Then he will be assigned the position of a gym leader, who can help the protagonist deal with a lot of things. Moreover, he is young and can think openly. When the protagonist surpasses him in strength, it will not be difficult for him to accept it, and he can be willing to listen to the protagonist's arrangements.
The pretentious slap in the face in the opening scene is too blunt, something doesn't look right no matter what, forget it and come on!
Why don't you get a 6v small diamond? . There is a chance that all small broken diamonds will appear in Diancie
The most important thing in Pokémon fandom is the bond between the Pokémon and their trainers. Gym battles and championships are important, but they are not everything. Giving away Pokémon is even more toxic. Have you considered the Pokémon's feelings?