
American Comics: Sign in at the Beginning with the Sparkling Fruit
美漫:开局签到闪闪果实
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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12MReads
1.3MFlowers
9.9 · 20.5kScore
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Resource Exchange in the Book Wasteland, Fan Articles!
I made an urban book waste resource exchange before, let's make a fanfiction one this time!
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Asking for Books, Ah, Ah, Ah, Ah, Big Guys
Looking for three types of books, big guys or authors 1. Those who are involved in external entertainment, those who are involved in the entertainment industry, those who make movies and sing, but do not have internal entertainment. They watch too much. There are some in the past, but the eunuchs are always annoying. 2. Those from American TV series and movies, such as John Wick, The Fast and the Furious, and The Expendables, which are more "daily gunfights" and more passionate and realistic. 3.
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Hey Everyone, Some Good-Looking Articles, System Articles, Wanjie Articles, Fan Fiction
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When I see the Demon Slayer Breathing Technique, I must have learned how to be the author of a street fight.
The author's structure is really small. The protagonists in the Marvel novels he writes are the highest-level Godfathers, and they are all virgin bitches. There are not many protagonists in dozens of chapters, and there are more scenes with supporting characters than with the protagonists.
The widowed sister just can't understand why so many NT authors would accept her. She had her uterus removed and it's inevitable that she would wander in the gray area and do that. Silly Gou
It's hard to breathe anymore. Now you have to start recuperating again.
Just like the title, if you don't kill people who can be easily killed, keep them. In the future, it will be easy to find trouble with pig's feet. The plot is watery and the word count is ridiculous. I have always emphasized that I am not afraid of trouble but I hate trouble, and then I have always asked for trouble. Zhenxiu, I have read the latest chapter, and I regret it. **You can have fun!
I was wondering why I should give gifts to those mentally retarded people worth hundreds of thousands? Do you feel great? Does it feel good to be slapped in the face all of a sudden? Aren't you happy after that? ?
Say something disgusting and caring, and your goodwill will immediately explode.
Also the breathing method, the leveling up, everyone is talking about a thousand cuts per second, and the upper limit is there due to physical limitations. If you change a superman to learn the breathing method, it will be better. It makes me laugh to death, the logic is wrong, the physical fitness is so low, let alone whether it can cut a thousand cuts per second, even if it is cut out, the body will be cut first with the hands. Shock break, leveling up means leveling up. The Naruto Chunin is more destructive than Demon Slayer in a fight. A jounin can do it alone. Don't tell me you can't destroy Demon Slayer. Various taijutsu, sealing techniques, ninjutsu, and even illusions are all there for you. What's even more funny is that the protagonist has the Shining Fruit and he still learns to breathe. Can your breathing be faster than the Shining Fruit? When pirates come to the Shichibukai, it's a direct one-way pass.
The breathing method does not have the power of fire, electricity, water, these real elements. This is an adjective, not an image word. The animation is all about special effects. In fact, there is no fire, electricity, water, etc.
Any Marvel novel that includes mutants will definitely collapse! ! !
Work hard, you know that you are very good, and you have supporters, but you still do things slowly, cautiously, and indecisively. Isn't it obvious that you are thinking about the word count?
I see many people in the comment area arguing about the breathing method. To be honest, I don't know if the breathing method is rubbish, but there is no doubt that the protagonist is very good! If other American comic book protagonists don't mention the Omniverse level at the end, they must also be at the Multiverse level, right? That's good for you, the author. You brag about how awesome the protagonist is throughout the whole story, but in the end, the protagonist is still a god-like little bastard, which doesn't feel good at all. If you don't get scolded, who will get scolded?
What do you guys think of this book? Is it poisonous? ⊙▽⊙
It's so poisonous, there are too many flaws, and what the hell is it that the Genius List is like to enter the Taoist realm before the age of twenty? ? My combat power has completely collapsed.
Where is Zhou Weiguo's fiancée Xiaoya?
There are so many SSS talents that feel like they are free of charge. One or two are okay. See for yourself how many SSS talents you have after writing more than 30 chapters? What do you write next? There are so many SSS talents that are as mindless as Chinese cabbage.
I want to ask how the male protagonist hangs himself on a lamprey
Although I like Anti-Japanese War novels, is this NT novel good?
I can't tell the difference between the body without dirt and the body with dirt. Brother, let me at least check it after I finish writing it before posting. It's not like the character cannot be written. It needs to be replaced by **. Um, these two characters don't seem to be **. I guess I typed it wrong in the input method.
The writing is a bit outrageous. Can a 2-nanometer lithography machine technology and a system become the world's richest man? What a joke. The market value of ASML is only a few dollars, and the supporting facilities have not kept up with the designed chips... Even if it is designed, Qualcomm will choke it. Photoresist and the like are not valuable, but they have to be imported. Many of the most high-end mobile phone accessories are from abroad. How can he be the richest man?
The author is probably not a master, so you should try your best to write more exciting chapters in the first few chapters, so that readers who click in can see your strength, otherwise there will be trouble in retaining people. You don't even recognize the protagonist's name, and he doesn't even have a surname after it. He just calls him Wangchuan. Don't you think it's funny? There are also plot characters like Ding Dian who appear. If I read it correctly, the protagonist has already mastered the Divine Light Sword, right? Are you planning to steal a woman? Is this plot arrangement useful for the protagonist? The other ones about Huang Rong and Yao Yue at the beginning are better than this one. At least the plot develops very smoothly after that, and the main theme of engaging women is well grasped.
The protagonist is a bit too arrogant and domineering. When I watched it, I felt that the protagonist should be punished.
Demons and ghosts are causing trouble in the world. The protagonist gets the power of gods and demons and then shouts that he wants to kill gods and demons! Really interesting
It is convenient to trade time and space with yourself. You can still believe in yourself.
I have only used the system twice. The system you want is useless, right? So many uses, or I won't write your writing system. You still use it twice. Oh my god, I don't even know what to say about you.
It's boring to write other plots before the Sui and Tang Dynasties were finished. The plot can be written like this. You are also a talent.
The author seems to have mistaken high school tennis professional players and real professional players. The German high school professional players are just the strongest high school students, which does not mean they are also the strongest professional players. Moreover, many professional players are not high school students.
For this type of article, can the title be consistent with the content? I'm speechless.
Update it soon, it feels pretty good
The writing is great and has a very graphic feel, but it would be better not to play the heroine for the time being. After all, she is too young and would be more awkward.