Genshin Impact: Treasure Hunt in All Realms, Get Wood Escape at the Beginning

It's understandable that the characters don't match up. After all, they are the same person. It's a secondary creation and there's nothing wrong with writing what you think. However, the emotional line is sparse, which means it provides a little more foreshadowing than for nothing. My suggestion is to write less if you don't know how to write. Otherwise, as soon as you write about emotions, it won't take long for the post-production Gan Yu to fall off, which will more or less make the protagonist lose some value. In my opinion, giving birth to a daughter in the end was a bit of a failure. It doesn't mean that I can't give birth, but the time I chose was a little inappropriate. Since I plan to let Ningguang and others become masters and disciples, is it a bit... To arrange for a daughter to grow up with them? If you think about it for a moment, it's probably a good brother you grew up with who suddenly wants to be your dad.

The author's typos, sentences, metaphors, exclamations, etc. In the book are simply inconsistent, the preface does not match the postscript, and the number of words is too high. It is not recommended to waste time by reading.

I glanced at the comments section before reading it. Some said it was written by the author Hokage, and some said it was written by the author Hara. After reading it, I felt that neither was the case. The author just wrote whatever he thought of, and there was no rigorous setting. For example, in the description of the battle between demon gods, mountains were razed to the ground. I think this is quite normal. Then I also think it is normal that the Wood Dragon Technique can defeat the demon god. The problem lies in the chakra of this elite jounin, but I feel that this has little to do with whether he can blow or not. On the contrary, I think the big problem is that the elite jounin can use the Wood Dragon Technique.

OK! Can! You can take your time and play by yourself. I won't wait for you.

6. The author is really not afraid of being scolded.

. . . Who would call Morax the Rock God in the Demon God War? He died speechless and the seven rulers of the world have not yet chosen.

Were there any Qiuqiu people during the Demon God War?

The solution for my sister's second meal at the beginning of the eighth game is that economists want to lose weight if customer service

Among the 8 people who responded, their girlfriends are Pang Di and Boss Yang.

This handwriting... Is the author a newbie?

I saw Chapter 6. Master Madara said that to Zumi, is there anyone more important in this world than me? I really can't think about it, I'm so young, this is the so-called love, the author can write such a thing, Xiang must, hehehe

Donghuang Taiyi is actually the elder brother, and the author is also 666.

It's best if all the wives are capable of fighting. If they are all vases, then it will be a hindrance and you can't protect them so comprehensively.

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Talk? You still need the help of your own followers. How awesome and funny did you say at the beginning? Believers cannot be gods, and gods who are believers can only be gods. So a few saints who are not even gods go to fight a demigod who can trample a god to death? Go back and read what you wrote. Why didn't God resist when he caught demigods like they were chickens? Still the weakest kind of god.

Now that I've pushed it, let's speed up next.

The title is novel and the content is good! Renew

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The author of the wave of giving away one billion cattle

First blood, a little bit too little to fatten up

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