Genshin Impact: Reviving King Deshret's Civilization, Starting with Taking Concubines

I feel that the protagonist treats his followers badly, and wants to distance himself from the sins of his followers. As a god and king, he should have the courage to bear the past of his people after he wakes up. It's not that every day the people have done something wrong, how much I despise them. They didn't do that just for you.

The Red King was described as very powerful before, but the protagonist grew up from scratch. If you want to understand one thing clearly, some people worship him, and some people must want to study him. A madman like the doctor has demon-level combat power and the ability to save his life in multiple slices. He would definitely dare to capture a newly resurrected demon to study, and the master on the other side would definitely dare to do so. Jiao Jin is looking for characters who don't have much description in the plot, and they are as rude as a teddy. This is disappointing. The strength is slowly improving, and the women around him have not improved much. They are just like the tools for giving birth. But at this speed, by the time the children are born and grow up, the travelers will probably have completed the seven kingdoms. Why does a cool novel overwhelm the protagonist's strength? The protagonist grows slowly, so how about improving the people around him and his subordinates? Or think about it, the protagonist should at least be between destructive and functional, and he must be full first! Otherwise, you are a god who often pretends to be a god and fools ordinary people. You just shout slogans without making any real changes. You are not worthy of the status of the Red King.

The key point is that the Red King actually still has people. Expanding the population should not be the main stage goal. What is more urgent is to improve personal strength, expand the power under control, and even improve the lives of the people in the desert, rather than focusing on expanding the population.

If you don't know how to write, then you really shouldn't write. Your protagonist is the newly resurrected Red King, and he has no power. He relies entirely on the faith of believers. He has no strength at all, and he has to slowly unlock it. Erbi, how strong is the Red King? Is it because you are more powerful than Tianli that makes you feel that you are not worthy of the Red King? Do you start writing that the main character will die if he has full power? Later, you will gradually increase your strength. You are writing a ridiculous article like this, and only Japanese women can regain your strength. In the end, you still end up accepting an unimportant role. It really makes me speechless.

Moreover, the reward for giving back is too low. Not only is there little improvement for oneself, but the women who are related to the protagonist are hardly improved at all. Judging from the current ability of the protagonist, any executive protagonist can't handle it. Moreover, the Fools, the Treasure Thieves Group, and the Qiuqiu people are Teyvat's forces all over the world. The most important Red King's Tomb in the desert has such a big change, but no one is investigating. A confident madman like the doctor is definitely interested in the resurrected god and will come in person. Judging from the speed at which the protagonist improves his strength, it would be difficult for him to reach the level of Osel even if he collects all the original gods of Xumi.

In the future novels about the Qin Shi Mingyue World with many children and many blessings, can there be content about the purple girl and the child Yan Lingji who have not established Zilanxuan? The characters should be improved after taking a look.

I want to see the protagonist collect Nero and resurrect the Flower Goddess

Looking at the Seven Gods, I feel that the Red King is the most similar to Jin Shining. It would be great if my personality is similar to that of Jin Shining. He is just as violent but has a certain temper. Especially his character is so high compared to the main character. It's a pity.

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The writing is quite good. Unlike other books, the beginning is as clueless as it is. After marrying a bunch of people, it's all covered in one stroke.