
KO One: I Awaken the Azure Lotus Earth Core Fire from the Start
终极系列:开局觉醒青莲地心火
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.1M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Urban Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
1.3kChapters
16.2MReads
142.9kFlowers
9.6Score
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If you feel so aggrieved, don't write about hanging out with the ultimate class. You should write about being a black man. The entire Ultimate Class was destroyed, their combat power was gone, and they all became Muggles. Judgment? Love Trial Let them try how it feels to not be bullied by others? Is this the right thing to write when your family is rich and yet they are bankrupt?
I almost cried and felt aggrieved. I still hang out with the Ultimate Team. Isn't this a masochistic tendency? And you can also devour other people's combat power, just like the devil. Do you think you are not the enemy of 12 Space-time?
**Why does the sun appear in the final three? What gay stuff. This woman is not that good. Why do all current Ultimate series have this thing?
If nothing else, this is indeed the case for Class 3 Li. He defended Zhong Wanjun without investigating, and Jin Baosan did bully Muggles. From a Muggle perspective, the pig's feet are right. It's just that the author didn't write it well. To put it bluntly, they are helping relatives but not helping others. In the original drama, the people in the ultimate class were not familiar with Wang Dadong, and no one spoke when he was framed. When Zhong Wanjun was suspected, Lei Ting immediately started to defend him.
It's already 70,000 words, and the first wave of plot is not over yet? In Feilu, you want to make money by writing like this? Dreaming
Suddenly I feel that maybe you are right. Film and television are all about glorification after all. Rich people bully poor people, let alone where there is fighting power.
The author has completely made a mistake in the formula. I have read so many fans in the Ultimate Series that either focus on love, or on brotherhood and the battle between good and evil. You are completely retaliating against society. This kind of writing has a small audience. You write the Douluo that is the most criticized now, but many people read it. The Ultimate Series is written like this and it is easy to be fooled.
How to say it? The protagonist has always behaved very arrogantly, defying the heaven and the earth. What kind of iron space-time is that? He didn't even pay attention to it. He doesn't take the order of time and space seriously either, but he has never been able to fight against the demonized power walker. It can be said that others are really fighting in the front, while he is jumping around like a clown in the back.
The combat power of the awakened in-situ superpower will be lower than 1W5???? You don't take the in-situ superpower seriously, right?
**I can still watch other things without using my brain, but can I turn Jinbao San into a useless person? Do you believe that as soon as you take action, there will be no scum left?