
Navigation: This Bouncing Fruit Is Different
航海:这个弹弹果实不太一样
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 597k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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3.4MReads
52.5kFlowers
9.5 · 1.2kScore
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Nami's talent was revealed after defeating Aaron. From this, we can see how much the protagonist doesn't care about his own cheats. Why waste the protagonist by giving such a powerful cheat. The attribute panel no longer appears. Mention the talents that need to be fused. You can just go through them without fusion. It just lets us know how much stronger the protagonist has become. It's too slow to follow the ship for hundreds of chapters and haven't entered the Grand Line yet. I suggest that the miscellaneous fish move in seconds. The small boss can be dealt with in one chapter, and the big boss can be dealt with in three chapters. It's too long and boring to write.
Bounce, bounce, bounce away crow's feet! ! Uh, we went to the wrong studio.
Later, I hope to shorten it to Final One and One Family, and then write about Three Kingdoms and Final Three, about evil girls and the dormitory. As for the last few movies, I haven't watched them because I heard a lot of people say that they don't look good after Final Three. You can keep your hair down and you have long legs~ suck (*head) Finally, come on, the author, put it on the shelves and order it all
Since the protagonist's personality has been changed at the beginning, we must never repeat the plot of the original film where he was a deserter, almost won the battle, and then confidently took the lead in surrendering and was eventually promoted. The author can strengthen Kirby's character, at least not like the original work. I like One Piece, but the plot behavior is really a bit unsatisfactory. I hope to see a different Kirby in the hands of the author.
Are you serious about stopping to practice for three months? It's basically the same as the original work, so the plot before the Grand Line didn't start for three months. After stopping for three months, Laosha became the king, Robin either died or ran away, the boatman was gone, Enel ran away to the moon, and the war on the top was over, and it's still a nonsense plot. The fastest way for the protagonist to grow is to rely on plug-ins. If you practice honestly, you are just mentally ill.
It's quite good, please write more. Come on.
The plot has collapsed... And improper handling of this unknown fruit will make readers leave...
Not bad, pretty good-looking. Come on update.
Are you still a eunuch? How about changing the picture every day to see your **? Is this how you play asking for subscriptions every day?
Author, don't be so foolish as to marry a woman from an aristocratic family!
About "Navigation: This Bouncing Fruit is Different" written by Yan Yanzi Chapter 17 Ripples! Chapter review.