Fantasy Villain: After I Failed, the Protagonist Collapsed

The whole botched system is superfluous. It's neither botched nor a harem, and it's even less enjoyable. More than half of the chapter is just my heart, so you can enjoy yourself slowly with your own heart, **

At first I thought the introduction was good, but in the end, there was such a ridiculous operation like letting others hear my inner voice. . . I lost interest in an instant. Why let others hear my voice? There is no secret at all. Is the protagonist still the protagonist? ? ?

Why are you listening to your heart again? If there is anything good to write about in your heart, it's all bad. The heartfelt voice is just to let the heroine know the plot and then become curious about the protagonist. Then, the hero scolds the heroine in his heart, and then the heroine takes the initiative to post it. After that, the protagonist and the heroine target the hero together. To be honest, I was mainly attracted by your cover and then, there is no more.

What's the secret to having your heart heard? For example, I know what you are thinking. What you want to do is good for me. Can't I do it one step ahead? If you want to kill me, can't I plan ahead and strike first? I know your chance and I can't cut it off, right? You are scolding me in your heart and if I find out, why can't I start a conspiracy theory and treat you like a leek? So the novel about the voice of the heart is really **, there is no secret at all, so forget it, there is actually a woman who likes the protagonist and licks her face and sticks to him. The Heartfelt Novel is more intellectually enlightening than the Return of the Dragon King

I have to say that this setting is simply poisonous. I was hooked when I saw the second chapter.

I've had enough. The timeline has no logic. It's like digging out my brain and dancing like crazy on it, especially relying on my defense.

It's disgusting and now there are still people writing a chapter of heartfelt speech**

I can't even say that it captures people's hearts. If you express your inner voice, if I were the heroine and could understand other people's voices, I could squeeze him completely and even make him regret traveling through time. Although it is said to be a cool novel, it has no logic at all and only makes money.

Seeing Ye Qingcheng hear the voice of his heart and decisively*, there is no big story about how this genre arose.

I don't dislike villain novels at first, but once the above settings are added, it is only for the sake of freshness. After reading ten or twenty chapters, you will find it boring.

If you want to make money in the online novel section, you need to be careful. Don't always copy other people's stuff. Can you come up with something new?

Well, why not write a story about the villain, the Son, who devotes himself to cultivation and ignores the so-called protagonist, and then becomes a legend of his own generation.

The protagonist in the original book is written to be extremely vicious, more villain than villain, and crazily belittled. Will writing like this make the character in this book appear to be very powerful? Ridiculous. The best part of a rival play is defeating a master. The stronger the opponent is, the more enjoyable it will be for the reader when you defeat him. It's written like an elementary school student bullying a kindergartener with such strength that it's really interesting.

Isn't it a mess? What is written after Chapter 47? Did you start walking around when you were just three years old? I thought at least the Emperor would go out.

It's enough to have one heroine who can hear her heart. If everyone is like this, it will be impossible to play. Pig's foot is just a monkey being played.

When the third world came out, the combat power system was completely gone.

The saints have just begun, Hunyuan Daluo Golden Immortal, Hunyuan Taiji Golden Immortal, Hunyuan Wuji Golden Immortal, Chaos Realm, Half-step Dao Realm, Dao Realm, Hongmeng Realm.

I really think this novel really ruins childhood! Well done to the Pokémon world. What game factors should be added? It annoys me just to look at it. It really ruins childhood.

You are already a Nascent Soul level person. How can you get so many dramas by playing Jinlun Dharma King?

Is the protagonist completely dead? He hasn't appeared in so many chapters.

There is no flesh left on Adam's body, so Ling Chi is lonely...

A dignified director does just this and is kidnapped by public opinion. Let's take it off first, right?

When does the author usually update? I'm really looking forward to it.

This book was written in 2014, as you know the content at that time, so it was deleted.

The writing is okay, but the updates are slow.

I just welcomed my first baby yesterday. My wife gave birth to her by caesarean section. I need to take care of her in the hospital for a few days. I will stop updating for the next few days. Please forgive me.

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