Siheyuan: The Great River Flows East

So much about He Yuzhu's growth process has been written before. As a result, what I wrote later looks like this. Isn't this no different from the original Silly Pillar? Why did you write a nonsense growth process? Moreover, it was too frustrating to deal with the internal affairs of the courtyard and the workplace, and I was plotted against at every turn. If a cadre is plotted against by people in the courtyard just like Yuan Shazhu before him, then why are you writing about it? I don't believe that He Yuzhu, who has grown up according to your writing method, can still be targeted by Yi Zhonghai and Qin Huairu. People who could directly attack themselves before can be so aggrieved and calculated without resisting. People who were able to scheme against others in labor camps before had no way of doing it. He doesn't have it himself, and no one he knows can give advice. The deaf old lady, Li Dapeng... Are they all dead? Won't you ask? Are the deaf old lady and He Yuyu people without their own ideas? Can't you communicate with them? It's so **** written

Books that like to torture readers probably won't do much better. After reading 90 chapters, I felt very aggrieved. ** It's not as good as the original Silly Pillar. At least people can live happily, at least that's what they think.

I saw the latest chapter, two words, I feel aggrieved!

Is this book too cowardly for you to write? It's been so long since I've been able to deal with Yi Zhonghai and the others. Does your protagonist have masochistic tendencies?

Without a system and a God's perspective, He Yuzhu would definitely be sucked by Qin Huairu. First of all, as the heroine, her looks are definitely good enough. If nothing else, Xu Damao's vision is not low, and the women he harms are all good. From the side, Qin Huairu's looks are quite good. Secondly, the Jia family does not know who Xu Damao is, and Widow Qin is a capable person. It can be seen from the destruction of the blind date, why Ran Qiuye cannot wash clothes, and why Qin Jingru is intercepted. Knowing who Xu Damao is, she still goes to Xu Damao's side. It is all a routine. Even if He Yuzhu doesn't take the initiative, Qin Huairu can do it by going directly into the house and taking off her clothes and calling him a gangster. At worst, why would she get married in advance? In the end, Yi Zhonghai deliberately let the Jia family suck blood, and even brainwashed Silly Zhu, saying that the Jia family was in trouble. In this way, Si Zhu has no money and relies on him even more. Therefore, if you don't open God's perspective, He Yuzhu will inevitably follow the old path. When writing the early book about Siheyuan, it is best not to let Qin Huairu enter Jia's house

I have seen so many courtyard houses, but this one ranks among the top three. Whether it is the writing style or the inner character and actions, it is very consistent with the characters of the time. It is a psychologically exciting Siheyuan book that I can read. There are really not many left

The author writes very carefully, and the more he writes, the better! The previous writing was very bland, so it was a bit slow to pick up. Seeing that I can no longer pull out my eyes. I'm worried about waiting for more updates.

Look at the back. If you don't come back with revenge during the liquidation later, you will really be a waste without eggs. What I wrote above will be in vain.

The content has its own ideas, but the writing is really bad. I won't go into details about some of the sentences that are not written smoothly, as I have not reviewed them myself. The content in the early stage feels like there is a lot of foreshadowing, and it often talks about what will happen in the future, which feels too deliberate and abrupt. I started to describe people as being a bit ruthless but not too much, having some brains but not very easy to use, and their only talent is learning to cook. Later, I wrote about the growth of the protagonist, but he did not grow up. The progress of his thoughts and thinking could not be reflected in his actions, and his life was tiring and frustrating.

Yuyu goes to school. How much time does it take for the widow to work and spend time together to brainwash Yuyu? Even if she doesn't go to school, there is an old lady at home every day.