National Fortune Elf: Play as Red, Teammate Karuni
国运精灵：扮演赤红，队友卡露妮
- Status
- Completed
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- 198k Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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After reading Chapter 10, I discovered a problem. Firstly, the female character's favorability is too fast, and she has a liking for no reason. The second and third breasts are at least starting with C. Thirdly, don't confuse Bengsan's Himeko and Bengtie's Himeko. They are two people, and the protagonist becomes sensational inexplicably? For the protagonist, Himeko is just data. Even if he meets a real person, he is not like that. Others can be said to be settings. I hate Himeko the most. This kind of treating one object as another object feels too ****.
Is this the character of Chihong? You said you were acting, so the acting should be a bit more like it, right? Even if you say it's 100% and there's no need to act, how many years can one person act as another person? What kind of personality would gravitate towards that direction? All I saw was the protagonist pretending to be cool, and the Riddler pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger.
It's too watery, more than half of the audience is talking
The protagonist's fighting ability is so fascinating. Although you want the protagonist to show off and make the villain transform into multiple stages to make the protagonist more powerful, the protagonist can obviously beat the gecko in seconds, but the attack is hit on the chest and just cut off the head. After all, he has the same recovery ability as a ghost.
Don't sleep until you finish writing. Rush rush.
Are you telling me this is an equal exchange?
Comments on Chapter 14 of Xiao Puji's "Play Genshin Impact Second Creation, Start with ak Barbara": Paimon was destroyed with one shot and the most wronged Qiuqiu man in history.
Sorry, all the messy things came together.
Author: Who is your nickname? I really like your style. Do you have any other works?