Let You Simulate Committing a Crime, Not Let You Commit a Perfect Crime

It's even more ridiculous when the protagonist comes back from the battle and is chased and scolded by Qin. Can the protagonist's situation be the same as Keli's? But Li was just being naughty and messing around. The main character was fighting or being ambushed, and the purpose was to kill the main character. Not to mention a reasonable, gentle and considerate person like Qin, even a normal human being would have to comfort the main character and ask for help.

I have watched more than 70 films, and the main character has little strength. Taking a marrow-cleansing pill at the beginning is of no use, and I don't know what effect the space has. All I know is to go up the pole and lick Baby Feng.

Remove Lu Mingfei and change it to Eriyi

Since it's a comprehensive comic, don't talk about the setting of "Fist Wish". It's so weak and incomparable. The hungry wolf is crying.

I thought the heroine would be Zhao Zimai, but Catherine turned up instead

To be fair, use as few examples as possible in Conan. Because most of them seem reasonable when you first look at them, but when you think about them carefully, you can't bear to think about them. Most modus operandi are difficult to replicate in real people. Not to mention the new cases in Conan's later years, which are basically NT. So use Conan's examples as little as possible.

Let's forget that No One Survives has been written. In fact, it would be too wasteful to just throw in a few chapters of a classic case like this. There is no need to write three cases a day, two is enough. Please be more detailed and specific.

Three cases a day is unreasonable, time is too tight

Hotel crime? Isn't the first reaction to investigate and monitor? Or is it that investigation and monitoring are not allowed in the rules? This kind of place with obvious surveillance is not the first investigation and surveillance! Prevent criminals from destroying evidence? Just guessing by watching the scene?

Let's estimate whether the horror game will arrive before it hits the shelves. . To be conservative, will a horror game that is 100 chapters old come?

This kind of setting does not have some classic techniques in the detective field, so the level is not high. The main character travels through time and relies on IQ and knowledge level. If it is just fun, there will be nothing to say. This book gives me the feeling that the supporting detectives are also made into non-tool people with high IQ talents. So I suggest the author to let the detectives solve one or two relatively not so difficult cases. Of course, they should be solved by top-level detectives, or even by newcomers. The detective's unintentional words make it clear, and then the detective's description and the program team's replay allow the audience to understand the whole process in the book and in reality, which also shocks the ordinary detectives. It can even be designed to make it almost impossible for the detective to obtain the key evidence if the program team does not directly give the results. The protagonist and the entire detective world have to go back and forth to write for a longer time, otherwise it will soon become the protagonist's solo show, but there will be no shock at the beginning.

In fact, the writing is good, but there are some bugs. For example, Xiaozhi became so calm after his rebirth, but Xiaoxia didn't react much? Xiaogang didn't travel together because of Orange Skirt Island, Xiaoxia was not surprised at all, and Xiaozhi trained Pokémon. Xiaoxia and Xiaogang wondered why they still need to train when they are so strong. From Xiaoxia and Xiaogang's point of view, shouldn't Xiaozhi think that Xiaozhi is too ambitious? She should be surprised, mocking Xiaozhi for being arrogant, and then expressing support. Xiaoxia and Xiaogang were like this in the Muyin chapter. They would despise Xiaozhi many times and think he is arrogant, but they would support Xiaozhi. Now Xiaozhi said that the regional champion is too strong so he needs to train. Xiaoxia and Xiaogang's reaction is too bland, just like the two of them are reborn.

His, his, even the little gangster was described as being like the Chaos Demon God. It was always his, his, etc. It was so embarrassing and speechless.

He has used so many high-end cases in just two hundred chapters. Will he become a detective later?

If you are directly rebelling, why should you kneel down and lick Li Shimin?

Actually named after Xiandi (Immortal Emperor)

The protagonist is mentally ill

Are there any novels that take stock of the powerful people of shadow?

Besides, the male protagonist is only 15 years old, ah, he seems to be less than 15 in this one. So why are you so anxious to get a girlfriend? Excellent people never lack partners.

Survival type (how long you have lived), love type, power development type, protection type, reputation type (how much is the reward in the world of One Piece), business type (make money under certain conditions), consumption type (spend money like a king and fish), demon-killing type (how many zombies are killed and how much reward is given)

Has Fei Lu been reserved by Zhuge Dali?

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The author wrote that Ling Tian couldn't do it himself, it was too idealistic

Sydney? Can't we have a tangerine? Durian? Pineapple? Rock candy heart?

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