Wuxia Crossover: I Founded a Longevity Clan for Stability

It's not interesting. First of all, the priorities should be clear. There is no need to keep the genealogy rewarded by the system for the tribe. Moreover, the genealogy sign-in you wrote is too outrageous. You don't even think about it. If you personally give benefits to the tribe, the tribe will be grateful. And by signing in, you can get this easily. Not everyone will be grateful. Secondly, after the clan leader you described signed in, he first wanted to know what the protagonist as an uncle could sign in, instead of thinking that the protagonist could come up with these incredible things. He shouldn't think about this. On the contrary, a sense of awe arose spontaneously. Finally, even if you write a family novel, the main character must be the main character. A genealogy check-in directly poisoned me.

The entire family is the descendant of the protagonist, this is the first step

The book you wrote is okay, and Uncle Dong is satisfied with it, but Uncle Dong is unhappy with the speed of your updates. Do you know the consequences of Uncle Dong's unhappiness?

Even in Chapter 3 of Water, I didn't change a single word. It's a bit of a trap.

I hope we can make a clear distinction between practicing martial arts and cultivating immortals. Nowadays, many authors who write mixed martial arts novels cannot distinguish between those who practice martial arts and those who cultivate immortals. They always confuse the two.

The writing is messy and very messy. After reading dozens of chapters, I kept comparing nonsense without doing anything.

A single ninjutsu from Thunder Shield and Kirin can be considered a god-level martial skill, so then Ten Thousand Swords Returning to the Sect is considered an immortal technique, right?

This is the result of a novel...

A hammer in the east and a stick in the west, chaos. Can't read

Well written! Uncle Dong is very happy! Flowers for you! Write too little! Uncle Dong is very unhappy! Let's keep it free for now!