Urban: A Century of True Qi from the Start, Hailed as the Imperial Preceptor

I don't know why the author made the protagonist so pretentious! Completely**! Obviously the protagonist has centuries-old skills and Nine Sun Magic Skills, but in the end, he has to attract the attention of the country first. He doesn't easily accept disciples and says that he won't cherish the skills if he teaches them easily! Doesn't the author think it's pretentious? You said it yourself that the parallel world you traveled through was originally spreading Qigong craze in the country of Daxia, and the people of Daxia went bankrupt in order to learn Qigong. Isn't this enough to cherish it? So what does it take to be cherished? People have lost their money on those useless charlatan exercises. After seeing that you really know how to do qigong, can you not cherish your exercises? This is not over yet. When the country came to contact him, the country asked him to be a national teacher, but the protagonist became even more pretentious! While saying that he couldn't invite those famous masters, he was thinking about how the one who won the group competition would become a national master! Just for the national broadcast? Then why don't you just agree to be the National Preceptor and let these leaders hold a live broadcast for you to demonstrate? It's no use going around in a circle!

The plot that should be written and the plot that should be extended have been mentioned in one stroke. There is a lot of unimportant nonsense. If there is a plot, just extend it. Reading novels is like playing games. Main tasks, side quests, and dungeons have to be interspersed. If you open a dungeon, you will be invincible and you will take the reward as soon as you open it. What if there is a wonderful plot in the dungeon?

When I see Calabash Baby, I think of the snake spirit who makes a hundred thousand cold jokes. . And the female dragon king

And you always go to the World Creation Gate yourself? Don't engage in the fairy world in the early stage. Isn't history and modern times all good? The whole country will work for you to spread your faith, get resources, exchange technology, and build a multiverse Chinese alliance. In the process, you can pick up girls, improve yourself, pretend to be next door when nothing happens, and study interesting plot rewrites. How great! Your writing is boring. Go to a different world. If nothing else, take Calabash Baby as an example. Flash a few words and the world ends. Wouldn't it be more interesting if it was the world of Calabash Child? The snake spirit's body is so clairvoyant that it bleeds to death, don't you take a look? If I find the pangolin before the old man gets the gourd seeds, I won't take the gourd seeds and see how the pangolin reacts? Confused? If the gourd seeds have just been planted, pee and water them... In the Green Snake World, if Xu Xian is knocked unconscious, pretend to be someone else... Or change Xu Xian's persona to a woman, or find Fa Hai and spend some points to convince him that you are Buddha. There are so many fun places and it's easy.

Leader and protagonist, kindergarten level IQ setting

A very good topic has been written to waste. The money in the bag didn't even cover the heat, it was all over the world.

They are really a talkative group. They are all dialogues. At the same time, he talks about using the national destiny to seduce him, and at the same time, he builds an arch to say that he will not go. He is really a bitch protagonist.

You can create two not-so-powerful ones that can block guns. Wouldn't it be better? Anyway, the ones you create are all your subordinates.

Just for money, no one wants to see it.

Even if 1.4 Billion people believe it, even 10 million people are not worth hundreds of thousands, not to mention that the news is too heavy on the protagonist!