My Father Is Hiruzen Sarutobi

I can only say that I am looking forward to your next book. The content can be read endlessly, but this section is true**

I really don't understand what the author was thinking about being able to travel through time with his parents. **People

Not divided into paragraphs, the words are squeezed together and it hurts the eyes to read

The whole novel is just "uncomfortable". After reading 10 chapters, this paragraph and this content are like explaining something and making annotations. It is not like a novel at all. It does not have the smooth, popular and straightforward feeling that a novel should have.

I'm really convinced, it's just a line break, but you changed the chapter before you finished typing a line, and the next chapter starts with a few words from the previous chapter.

After reading Chapter 3, I felt uncomfortable with the paragraphs. I thought about how I went to school to write about it. The number of words was not enough, so I divided it into paragraphs. This kind of paragraphing is worse than the composition I wrote in school. How did you guys even subscribe after reading Chapter 3?

This style and format is unflattering here.

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