Detective Conan: Ma'am, Do You Need Any Help?

He is obviously a manga fan, but he has to act like someone who leaked secrets and was obliterated by the rules. His energy is a hammer.

It's this kind of self-love story again. Xiaolan likes the "previous protagonist" and she also said that she decided to marry the protagonist when she grew up. But in the "present" timeline, that is, more than 10 years later, she hides her identity on the excuse that it is impossible for a person to maintain her appearance for more than ten years. The key point is that Xiaolan still likes the "former" protagonist, but at the same time she is blushing and jealous of the "present" protagonist's behavior. Is it fun to do it to yourself?

I can't comment on your book. One person will use it until it reaches the shelves, right?

Start a new book, author. Find the shortcomings in this book. This book is already useless. The number of words is nothing but water, and it's one chapter a day. I don't understand the point of you continuing to write it.

Unless it involves transcendence, seeing immortality is basically useless. Japan is still under the control of the United States, and there are still wineries

Write less plot and more originality

The author piles up the characters' intentions and inner thoughts without any modification. This is like wanting to eat green vegetables, green pepper shredded pork, kung pao chicken and white rice for lunch today. A mature writer will carefully process the ingredients and then combine them to create a beautiful dish. Tasty dishes, and you, reading your book, just cook all the ingredients in one pot, and the final taste will definitely be terrible, so some explanations are not necessary, or even repeated multiple times. The author needs to carefully identify those explanations that need to be deleted and those that need to be streamlined.

I'll give it a try first if I rate Flowers, but generally just wait and see.

How many women will the author accept?

Comments on Chapter 024 Kudo Shinichi's Strange Switch "Ke Xue: Madam, Do You Need Help" written by Bai Jiu.