
American Comics: Wanda Breaks Her Vows and Gets a Superman Template
美漫:破戒旺达,获得超人模板
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 271k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
110Chapters
1.6MReads
17.5kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 51
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Why did you write a loser with a Superman template?
Is there something wrong with joining S. H. I. E. L. D.? It was formed by an ordinary person. After joining, you have to be ordered around. How smart is it?
And then join S. H. I. E. L. D. To avoid getting arrested?? Are you sure you want to write that in Feilu? What is the use of your super template? A weakened version of the motherland can do whatever it wants, not to mention that you are already a mage graduate and have a mage template. What are you afraid of?
Brother, there is something wrong with the positioning of your novel. If you want to write it happily, then let the protagonist have a little temper. I don't think a Superman can be that cowardly. If you want to write a good-tempered man, then don't write Ross's line carefully at the beginning, otherwise we will feel uncomfortable when you get scolded. If you don't have that ability, don't write it blindly.
Regardless of which version the Ancient One is, male or female, he is a wizard and mage from the beginning to the end. They are just protecting monks near the Himalayas, so you just call them monks.
I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding you.
You can't say that Gu Yi's disciples are monks just because he is bald.
The ancient one is bald. He is a mage, not a monk. There is no such thing as violating the precepts. Your title is wrong.
Otherwise, it would be really disturbing to watch. If you want to foreshadow a little bit or make a slowly growing protagonist, then don't be high-profile at the beginning, and don't break the rules, don't fix it, a useless protagonist can't be controlled. It's really not as good as straight steel. No one sees the growth process, and you can't describe that feeling. It's much better to just do it, and no one will feel uncomfortable.
The writing is really bad. Is there such a weak Superman? Can also be shot in the head by bullets