Myriad Worlds: Building the Four Seasons Immortal City in a Martial Arts Crossover

I don't know how the author did it. Anyway, I saw a few pictures of a very good subject and I was motivated to read it. But after reading the author's writing style, I was immediately confused. I always felt that the preface did not match the follow-up. Nothing was explained clearly, and it felt like it was just going through the motions. There was almost no description of the main character giving Xiao Se the Marrow Cleansing Pill. He just took it out and Xiao Se saw it and thought it was OK. Then the two negotiated the price and concluded the deal! In the middle, the protagonist's offer was denied by Xiao Se's counter-offer, which was very related to Bai Xiaotang. Then the protagonist made a careless statement and said that he should be careful in the future. You explained clearly why Xiao Se denied Bai Xiaotang. Why did the protagonist give in when he saw Xiao Se's denial? Why should the protagonist make careless remarks? He should be more careful when negotiating with the dynasty lord and other high-level officials! The co-author is only responsible for writing two sentences and the middle content is left to the reader's imagination? Anyway, the author didn't write in places where he should be verbose, and he didn't write in places where he shouldn't be verbose, so it just made me confused.

Ximen Chuixue! Would these people in Dugu Qiufei not understand the meaning of the sword???

The article is so weird to read, so awkward, and there are a lot of typos and the sentences are not fluent, but the subject matter is quite novel.

Why do I feel like I'm reading compositions and Chinese textbooks?

Why do you look so awkward?

The subject matter is good, but the writing is too violent. Li Yunlong is too poisonous, and the writing is not fluent. Please practice hard.

It's a mess, there are a lot of typos, and the sentences are not fluent, but the subject matter is okay, but it's nothing.

Your idea is quite good, but there are too many different characters, and you didn't write the characters in an impressive way, which is very outrageous. Even when I was a primary school student, I didn't feel uncomfortable reading your novel.

The writing style is too "profound" to appreciate

It's not a question of whether it's chaos or not. It's the first time the author has written about Zhutian City. You can check it out. I have a Zhutian City and other Zhutian Wen of the same type. Although the Zhutian City type in Feilu is a bit unsatisfactory, it's okay in the early stage. You can learn from it and practice more in the later period. What you're writing now is to be honest. You don't even know what Zhutian City is used for, and it's too chaotic. For each level of the world, you can actually choose a few from the novel. Famous, and to be honest, you can only finish 100 chapters later, so I can't continue reading. And even if you like Jianlai no matter how much you like it, you won't be so stupid. What are you writing now? What is the purpose of Zhutian City? Is it just for the city lord to transcend or for the development of all heavens? Can the employees and the forces in the city be separated? Damn it, as a city lord, you might as well just write about the forces and let everyone become your subordinate.