Preparing to Rebel: This Is Actually a Wuxia Crossover World?

Everything the protagonist does is questioned by Huang Rong and Yao Yue. Even the subordinates he summons are questioned before they'll do anything, and they spout a lot of nonsense. Writing novels like this on Feilu is ridiculous. People are here for a lighthearted read, but constantly questioning the protagonist is like a rebellion, and some brainless supporting characters are still asking, "Do you dare? Do you dare?"

No wonder I got criticized by other guys. Even I, with my maxed-out poison resistance, shook my head at the sight. Summoning hundreds of thousands of troops turned out to be like playing in the mud. Moreover, the protagonist's character design is also considered idiotic.

I won't say anything else, but you wrote this during a rebellion, and less than 1/10 of it was about the rebellion itself; the rest was all about questioning and arguing with those women. You're really something else, writing more words to make money.

The protagonist is constantly being advised by his subordinates? Who's actually rebelling? Are you kidding me? Didn't you do any research on similar stories before you started writing? Are you a newbie?

It's so frustrating to watch! Fifty thousand men from the Eastern Depot and the Embroidered Uniform Guard are afraid of a mere Yaoyue? I almost laughed. This is such a forced arrangement!!!

To be honest, does the protagonist think he can exploit the summoned soldiers just because they have maxed-out loyalty? They're fighting tooth and nail in the front lines, while the native soldiers are enjoying themselves in the back. They can be wasted at will, since they can always be replenished. That's a bit toxic. You have to remember you're summoning people. What if one day you manage to lower the loyalty of your summoned general, and then he raises his banner in rebellion? You're doomed!

A normal person who time-travels should understand their situation. Who would immediately rebel upon time-traveling? In peaceful times, if you rebelled, your subordinates would all become disloyal. You need a plan for a rebellion, right? Just attacking without thinking is truly unbelievable.

This is ridiculous! The summoned characters are all fiercely loyal, even monitoring each other, and they whine and complain to those who could kill them. It's a brainless story. And they even rebel! Not a single capable subordinate. Any character who isn't the protagonist wouldn't survive three chapters.

I suggest you don't come to Feilu. I'm not talking about anyone in particular. That's the truth. Feilu started out by creating fan fiction, harem stories, and mindless wish-fulfillment novels. If you're looking for something insightful and meaningful, please visit other websites. It'll be a win-win situation for everyone.

After reading the first chapter, I knew it was written by an idiot. To think that cross-dimensional martial arts was like flying through the air—if you don't have cultivation, do you think anyone would respect you? How could you become a city garrison general without cultivation? Even if you were willing to go and die, the emperor wouldn't trust you.