Preparing to Rebel: This Is Actually a Wuxia Crossover World?

How should I put it? The protagonist doesn't think that the summoned soldiers can be exploited at will when their loyalty is full. They are fighting life and death at the front, while the indigenous soldiers are enjoying life in the back. They can consume them at will, and they can replenish them at any time anyway. This is a bit poisonous. You have to know that you are summoning people. If one day the loyalty of the general you summon is destroyed by you, and then you raise your arms, what are you waiting for if you are not finished?

Isn't this funny? The summoned people are all loyal to each other and supervise each other. They will bully people who can kill them. It's really mindless and they are rebelling. They don't have a single powerful subordinate. If it weren't for the protagonist, he wouldn't survive Chapter 3.

After reading the first chapter, I knew that what I was writing was a fool. He actually regarded mixed martial arts as flying. If you have no cultivation, will you be subdued? How did you become the general guarding a city without cultivation?

I wrote a bit too much about salary. In the 1960s, salaries never exceeded a thousand, so you had to look up information when writing a book.

The most troublesome thing about summoning an army is how to provide logistical support. Suddenly there are 100,000 more people to eat. Do you know how much food is consumed every day?

Water, you a**, you just added so many dramas to a piece of trash, and even if you force Shi to extinguish a star and destroy a planetary system, how much have you strengthened it?

It's best to give the male protagonist some self-protection ability, otherwise he will be easily destroyed.

In your setting, Lin Fengjiao is Lin Jiu's eldest brother, but two Uncle Jiu are not enough.

The plot is terrible and the writing is extremely poor. I can't even understand the character of Xiao Ting. I can only describe Xiao Ting as wise and brave with adjectives. However, Xiao Ting's behavior in the plot is as if he is mentally retarded, but he still emphasizes that he is wise and brave. The plot is so bad that I can't watch it. I haven't even written a few scenes at the beginning and I'm already falling in love with Yao Yue.

Mom, you are gibbering and talking nonsense. Anyone who has no girls will die. Anyone who disobeys will be sent to the west. Every martial arts novel is either Huang Rong or Yao Yue Lian Xing. He is so damn convinced.