Anime Crossover: Demons Run Amok, and You Call This Everyday Life?

Snow is under the snow, poetry is rising in the clouds, and quietness lies in the flat tomb. Many fan authors use these three characters too hard, causing readers to dislike them.

To be honest, the main character's name is so funny. Isn't it good to use a Japanese name for the protagonist in a Japanese drama? I really can't think of some names that are rarely used in other novels. Why is it called Lin Yi? This name is so funny, isn't it?

Author, if you write something extraordinary, can you add a patch or something? For example, ordinary people have their own rules that cannot be lifted. Really, Yotsuya Miko, I have told you many times that you will not patch it up. Just her brother and those ghosts in the original novel will take advantage of you and you won't patch it up? Let's not talk about the audience issue. Avoid what you should avoid. If you add an invisible ghost and there are so many female characters, you won't be able to protect them. Maybe you don't even know that the ghost took advantage of you before they met you, right? So why not add patch settings? Wouldn't it be better if I said there were no ghosts??

The venomous tongue of anime characters is just a characteristic of them. No one can be venomous indiscriminately. When writing a novel, you should consider keeping it close to reality in some aspects.

I really hate people with venomous tongues. Except for Yukino's chapter skipping, everything else is okay.

How to say it? , I feel that the protagonist's abilities are not very good??(ˊωˋ*)??, When Toka wakes up first, when it comes to Angel, I feel that Angel is full of energy, this protagonist needs to be strengthened? (▼ヘ▼#)

After reading so many chapters, I can see that this author can clearly copy and have various abilities. However, he always looks at other people's faces when doing things. He has no explanation for recommending girls. He has no emotional connection and relies solely on his past accumulation. He also has no explanation for the previous background and progress. He also has to make a lot of mistakes every time he recommends someone. He has to emphasize that he has special abilities the night before or the next morning.

Actually, I think being known to be a mind reader will only scare people, and then they will stay away.

You Yukino wrote it... If you don't know how to write it, don't write it yet. Look at the original work. It's so written...

Why, Fei Lu, when writing a variety comic or a Japanese comic, do the protagonists have to be biased towards the behavior of the protagonist in the Japanese comics? Feeling, I don't know how to put it