Naruto: Once the Pay Arrives, the Five Kage Get Kicked to Pieces

Chapter 5, in the world of Naruto, if you eat the devil fruit, don't say you will be restrained by water, okay? Personally, I feel this is a poisonous point.

As the title suggests, the original heroine of the fanfic, oh! How many years of cerebral thrombosis does it take to come up with such a disgusting plot? If the author is sick, he must be treated, not ***! How many of the original female protagonists written by fans here in Feilu actually survived? Could it be that the author thinks he will be one of the successful ones? Is this too much confidence? How great would it be if you honestly wrote that you collected all the beauties in the original novel and opened a harem? So you ended up writing an original heroine from the Hyuga family? Are you going to turn against the Hyuga family over this so-called original heroine? Hinata doesn't want it anymore? Even if you want to steal the marriage, you should go to Uchiha to steal Mikoto! The clan is destined to be exterminated anyway, so it doesn't matter if they become enemies, but in the end, they provoke Hinata, who will not be exterminated? Brain is a good thing. Author, if you don't use it, please give it to people in need. Don't put your brain aside to eat dust. To be honest, the best way to deal with your so-called original heroine is to make friends with the Hyuga clan through life-saving grace, so that you can have Hinata in the future, instead of stealing the marriage and making people sick.

When I saw the women were Hinata, Naruto's mother, and Mikoto, I already knew that I was fucked. It was good at the beginning, but it became worse and worse as it went on. Goodbye

The title "Kizaru" is now part of the title. This is a person's name. Who knows what "Kizaru" is? Just inherit the template and inherit the character and ability, including the name. Really low.

What the hell, the ability to use templates has to be obtained through lottery. The last time I was so speechless was the last time.

This book can be put*, it's definitely a eunuch, it's not impossible to have an original female protagonist, but at least the writing style must be able to hold up, so forget it.

I want to see Kizaru not getting along with Konoha in the later stage, and defecting, and then Jiraiya comes to stop him, and Kizaru and Jiraiya fight.

I think it's okay to create your own heroine. Does it really have to be exactly the same as the original? Is this a fan? Some people are really funny.

In fact, for most novels with multiple female protagonists, it is not that the more female protagonists the better, it is easy to go too far. There is an upper limit for multiple female protagonists, and it is easy to become bloated if written too much. This is why many people are disgusted with original female protagonists, because if you create an original female protagonist, it means that you occupy an extra position. Isn't it good to leave this position to other two-dimensional characters? Moreover, the original heroine has no sense of immersion. The character and appearance must be well described to have a sense of immersion. If the writing is a little bad, readers will have a bad impression. But if it is the original character of the anime, there is no such problem. Even if the writing is poor, people will make up for that character.

Also, in Chapter 30, the heroine, well, I should call her the heroine, was kidnapped. You also said that the kidnapper said that the heroine has a good figure? What do you think, author? . .