Naruto: My Talent Is Off the Charts

When I saw this kind of time travel and didn't even know it, I didn't even want to watch it anymore, it was boring.

Traveling to Naruto but having no memory of Naruto...

It's quite interesting to read the synopsis, but when I look at the time traveler, I have no memory, the plot needs to be original, and it's still slow-moving. With this result now, I can only say that the author deserves to be thrown into the street.

Why is it so hard to find a normal novel?

If we don't know the original work, it's okay for you to write like this. But when we all know the original work, it feels like the author is showing off his intelligence by writing like this.

This is really unacceptable

Didn't I say that you didn't calculate the ages of the characters when you wrote them?? The protagonist and the three people are from the same period, which means that they are all 50 years old in the 60th year of Konoha. At the same time, the fourth generation Raikage is 42 years old according to the formula book, and the Raikage think tank Toshiro is 49 years old. According to the content of the novel, the Third Raikage is only 5 or 6 years older than the protagonist, which means that the age difference between the Third Raikage and the Fourth Raikage is about 13 years!!! The Third Raikage gave birth to a child at the age of 13????? Not to mention the bug of receiving family members at the age of 13 during the Warring States Period! Judging from the original work alone, after the peace talks between the Second Hokage and the Second Raikage failed, the Third Raikage fought and killed the two Hagoromo brothers from the same village!! From this we can see how powerful the Third Raikage is! Besides, the two Hagoromo brothers are both degraded versions of jinchūriki!! From this, it can be seen that the Third Raikage was at least 18 years old when he was in Konoha for 17 years. He was the same generation as Chiyo and Sarutobi Hiruzen! Based on the time of your novel, after the outbreak of World War I, at the age of 15 or 16, you could kill two people who were at least starting out as Jinchūriki? And Hagoromo's bloodline is very strong! Neither can Hashirama. The design of the age alone is very loose, and the puppet technique was developed by the second generation and carried forward by Monzaemon. His peak work is "Chikamatsu Ten People!!" According to the formula, Monzaemon was the first to learn the puppet technique. Do you think he might be Chiyo's disciple? Can you still use magnetic escape?? Although the magnetic escape was indeed developed by the second generation Unless you just used the name Emon, it can be said that what you wrote is completely wrong! I just happened to read Chapter 87 and I really can't help but tell you something!! And your old purple can get along with the four tails as equals at the age of 12?? If you look at the statements of the Four-Tails and the others, you will know that it was a lot of hard work for Lao Zi to develop the Melting Release, and most of the Melting Release was achieved with the help of the Four-Tails. How can he develop the Melting Release Chakra mode at such a young age? With such talents, why should Yanyin worry about the future??? When the Sannin were young, their talents were only developed when they were 11 or 12 years old. Orochimaru and the others had strong chakra control such as Palm Senjutsu when they were around 6 years old!! They are geniuses, but not to an outrageous level. People like Kakashi can only control chakra like Chidori at the age of 12, and they are not yet stable and their physical fitness is not high! After all, there are only a few like Itachi, and this is the light of his brother's plug-in Indra Chakra! Forget about the protagonist in the early stage, you'd better write it, as long as it's a named one, just Uchiha Itachi per capita... And it's the Senju version of Uchiha Itachi...

When can the protagonist grow up? I mean in terms of thinking. As a time traveler, even if you lose some memories, there is no need to trust others so much. I feel like the author, do you want to make the protagonist mature through something? After all, Konoha is beginning to feel polarized. The three generations have gradually become obsessed with power. The struggle between the protagonist and the three generations is about to begin, and I feel that the Uchiha are also starting to cause trouble. After all, it has been ten years, and none of the things promised by the three generations have been implemented. Author, do you want this to start the conflict between the protagonist and the three generations?

I really don't understand the amnesia at the beginning

The pace of this book is relatively slow, and the plots are from the Sannin period. The original book did not cover that stage, so there are a lot of originals in the plot. Please forgive me for my shallow writing skills. In terms of imagination, everyone is better than me, so if you have any ideas, just put them forward. If you think they can be used, they will be added to the book. Finally, thank you for your support, thank you!!!