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This part is a bit toxic and disgusting. If you were to write that an entire galaxy is invaded by something like the Tyranids, that would be absurd.

The "illegal transmigrator" label is ridiculous. Author, you might as well set up a universally accepted rule for transmigrators in the multiverse, and anyone who violates it would be judged as an illegal transmigrator. All I see here is someone with ulterior motives trying to steal other systems.

Don't write plots like Joan finding a Lipis-Adam husband, or I'll think I'm reading an urban fantasy novel.

The mindset of the new Ultraman is different from that of the traditional Ultraman. The new Ultraman seems to be a maintainer of the cosmic order, sensing that human civilization threatens other civilizations, or even that the universe will destroy human civilization. In the end, he is moved by the actions of humanity and thus destroys human civilization.

This is just hypocrisy; you're a time traveler yourself, yet you criticize others. It would be better to set yourself as belonging to the Lawful Alignment, leaning towards good, while the other transmigrator is in the Chaotic Alignment, leaning towards evil. You could set the other transmigrator as having committed many evil deeds, and the protagonist, being in the Lawful Alignment, leaning towards good, would need to defeat or kill the Chaotic, evil transmigrator.

The "illegal transmigrator" concept is worse than something like "evil transmigrator," "righteous transmigrator," or "illegal transmigrator." What kind of law or rule is this? This is a bit twisted. If you can transmigrate, that's fine, but if I transmigrate, it's illegal? So the protagonist is a legitimate transmigrator, but everyone else is an illegal one.

After reading the first chapter, I felt like complaining. The protagonist transmigrated into Lipia and lived for over ten thousand years—what kind of concept is that? Five thousand years of Chinese civilization is only half the protagonist's age. How can the limited memories of his previous twenty years, which influenced his values and habits, possibly have any impact?

They're all transmigrators, and it's a multiverse genre. They can transmigrate, but others can't? Who says so? This setting is ridiculous!

The Spire from Lipias exploded, and the original version withstood a bomb that wiped out the surface. In the finale of the Dream series, the ray of light revived the sun, exceeding the proportion of a planet-exploding ray. Don't bring up higher dimensions; high temperatures are generally associated with clouds. There's no indication in Sinnoh that higher dimensions increase combat power. The original four-dimensional monster, Bruton, was defeated by a single Spire attack.

Belial was forced to fuse with Reiblood. When he possessed Reiblood, Belial was already rejecting him and kept telling him to stop before finally letting go. So is it really okay to belittle Belial like this?