Genshin Impact: Venti Exposed from the Start
原神：开局温迪被曝光
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 175k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
82Chapters
1.3MReads
9.9kFlowers
10.0Score
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Why is it that these recent new books with protagonists will almost always have the female character's underwear? Don't you think it's obscene?
Keep playing videos??? What's the use of the protagonist being invincible?
Now that you have added the protagonist, let's do some daily life. They are all secondary creations. The ratio of secondary creations to daily life is ten to one? There is no interaction with the characters at all, just like where Gan Yu takes a few days off, and then returns to Liyue in less than one chapter, and describes it in just a few sentences in less than two chapters? Then tell me what is the use of this protagonist? Moreover, the favorability between other characters and the protagonist is inexplicable, and there is no interaction, so how can they have good feelings????
The characters in the novel have no sense of reality at all. They are obviously from Teyvat, and they have no reaction at all when they see something they don't recognize for the first time. For example, what about the UP card pool, drawing cards, etc. You don't know or recognize the character of Teyvat, so you don't have any doubts about it? Also, after the creation of the Rock King Emperor in Dadalia, the name Zhongli was mentioned, but there was no follow-up reaction after the creation. It felt like the author was just creating a second creation for the sake of second creation, and was not rigorous at all.
Here comes a paratrooper and the protagonist, I will call you brother and you will call me dad.
Part of your novel is very rigid, and part of it is copied from other novels. Generally speaking, the writing style is not particularly good. I suggest you start it again. It is best not to copy the plots of other novels. You must have your own new ideas. Come on!
The rewards are chaotic, so only the second creation can take a look.
How come Fei Lu is following the trend now? Can your mother not be able to support you in business? Write everything.
Can you tell the Teyvat people about card drawing and card pools that others can get? Just messing around, right?
This system is the most generous one I have ever seen. What should I do next? How to write? Write Honkai Impact 3. Then write about the heavens. Write hundreds or thousands of chapters