Taking It Easy in the Fourth Division
我在四番队悠闲度日
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 864k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
394Chapters
3MReads
19.4kFlowers
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Reader comments 32
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It can be seen that the author is a novice and writes very carefully, but the level is still a bit green, the Japanese is a bit unnecessary, and there are too many descriptions of Ichigo from the original drama. The biggest problem is that the protagonist's position is not clear, because the most attractive part of this article is your setting. The deputy captain of the fourth division, a lazy salty fish, a strong man, and the same period as the captain, a perfect setting. But after the plot started, there were protrusions here and there, spoilers here and there, and then they licked Rukia and then the brainless deputy captain of the fifth division. It was very messy and a**. Why don't you lie down more, watch the show occasionally in important places, thank you for getting along with Lie, and then take action at the more critical moment. To be precise, what I'm writing now is that the setting is very high-level, but the performance is very low-level. He is better than the captain, and he has lived for thousands of years, and he still looks like a loser. . .
I'm mentally ill, I added a lot of Japanese, it's stupid
Very well written, don't write it next time
When writing a novel, just write a novel. If you insist on adding a few sentences in Japanese, is it because you are afraid that others will not know that the God of Death is Japanese?
It's very well written, don't write it next time
The main character you wrote has no sense of existence at all and is so middle-class. Isn't it awkward for you to write it?
I'm tired of drinking Dingzhen, and I identified it as: What kind of "Harbin Beer"
My head hurts when I read it. You, the author, are a talented person. How did you write this? You can endure what ordinary people cannot endure. You, the author, are a person who does great things.
Is this the first time I heard that Yijiguxu's ability comes from Yhwach? How did I hear it was from Aizen?
Just the pile of Japanese homophones alone makes people have no desire to read anymore.