Wuxia Crossover: I Become Huang Yaoshi's Disciple, with the Eight Sounds of Tianlong from the Start

I curse: Those who give me likes will be attacked by loli at night. Those who leave comments on me will be attacked by royal sisters at night. Those who do not give me likes will be attacked by me at night?? Chi v Chi

The protagonist should be preaching the Great Dao, or the Tao, or the Eternal Dao, but instead he is preaching the Immortal Dao? One person and one mountain are considered immortals, and the author's style is too small

The timeline of these nine gates is wrong. The head of the Wu family who founded the nine gates was Mr. Wu during the Republic of China. Also, if you already have two players, don't modify other people's memories and become your own die-hard loyalist. You actually just deleted other people's memories about yourself. Isn't this putting the cart before the horse?

I'm impressed that this data has persisted for so long.

I'm disgusted by the addition of real-life Internet celebrities, and I'm even more speechless by setting up live broadcasts.

I pieced together things here and there, but it turned out that this didn't work and that didn't work. The writing was particularly poor.

The strength in the later realm has already risen. There is no need for turtles and flies to spend their lives to fight monsters. Just for the sake of pretending, you are enough.

The more I write, the more confusing it gets. Martial arts turns into fantasy,

What is written after chapter 128? It is obviously a martial arts novel. After chapter 128, it is written directly as a fantasy novel. If you don't want to write it, don't write it. If you don't have any problem, find a ghostwriter.

The author's Chinese language is not very good. He explained a lot about why a protagonist cannot practice martial arts. The result is the same as not explaining it. He might as well not write it.