Martial Arts: We Are in Qixia Town, and We Start with Two-Sleeved Green Snakes.

In the previous chapters, I said that my qualifications are very poor, but you don't choose to have additional qualifications. I am not sure what to choose when I am forty, and what about melancholy and good looks. It is too fake. If you have poor qualifications + 20% of the cultivation speed, it is useless, or it can return to the normal level. How can it be so exaggerated? This percentage is only useful for people with high qualifications.

With such an unparalleled opportunity as the system, he still needs another master to ride on his head, and his reputation has been given to others. It would be great not to have a master. When someone asks, he will say that he is self-taught. Gifted.

I just saw a dozen of them. Is the author serious about using Tai Swordsman on the characteristic map of Xuan Kingdom? There's definitely nothing wrong with you blasting outside, but it's not appropriate to blast on a special map, right? Tang Dao, Heng Dao can't do it? I recognize Guandao, Huanshou Dao, and machete. Guns and swords are fine too.

I've read too many manga and comics. When I see the dark bullets, I think of 3 million lolita waiting to be fed. Hey-hey

The Su Xuan you played sounds really cool, not as interesting as Lu Qinghou, which is a pity

Um, after reading more than a dozen chapters, I don't know why the author asked the protagonist to have a master. I feel it's unnecessary. It's not that the protagonist can't become stronger on his own, and it's not that there is no system. On the contrary, the protagonist's apprenticeship will make him a mess. It's okay if the protagonist is weak, but it's really unnecessary when the protagonist is stronger.

They have all traveled through time to others, and they still use their previous names, and they all have Tongfu Inn. Lao Bai and the others don't have any ** books written by them.

? ? ? After being surrounded and killed by so many forces, he returned to Qixia Town in such a dejected manner? Not to mention wiping out the royal family, what kind of Taoist temple, what kind of family can't wipe out the whole family? It's so cool that you don't even know how to write it?

It looks fine from the front, but the more you look at the back, you feel that the combat power has increased directly. It's too fast. Maybe it's just me.

Two women were lured out of nowhere to kill the protagonist. Are you seriously ill, just because the protagonist started beating up a minion? Then these two women came, and they were determined to kill the protagonist. In the end, they tied, and they said they would bring that man's head over to make amends. Do you think you are sick?

**Novel in Saint Seiya skin

I can't even tell the difference between the simplest passive and active

A corpse is alive if it has a soul. Is it still a corpse?

The more he writes, the more he looks like a villain. It would be easier if you wrote that the whole world came to kill the pig named Su, but you just let the villain do his best to kill the protagonist, putting the cart before the horse, pretending to be thirteen and not running towards the stupid side...

What did you write at the beginning of Chapter 11? You wrote about the inexplicable murderous intention yourself. The Cui family are other people's chess pieces, that is, leg pieces. Just because pig's feet don't give others face, a top power, master and disciple came to trouble pig's feet? If you can't beat the enemy, then use the chess pieces to top the tank? Is there any logic?

Chapter 1: Eat beef. Can ancient beef restaurants sell it casually?

Is it okay for the main character to be called Su Xuan or Lu Qinghou?

The names are not consistent, which is a failure. Not to mention there is foreshadowing behind it, it is totally impossible to see that time.

Not seeing you for one day is like three autumns. You have not seen me for so many years.

I haven't seen you use the green bamboo sword even if it's broken, so what are you doing with it?

Writing about asking for flowers or something like that affects the reading of the book.

Not only are there typos, but some of the word order does not make sense, which is confusing.

What is this palace?

After reading it now, I realized that I have read 3 of your 4 books, including 2 of them: Fattening

About the fantasy talent book "I am a beast master, what the hell is this Red Lotus Godzilla?" Chapter 14: Great Harvest! The first dark gold level equipment! Is Canghun Guild a leek box? (8/10 Please give me flowers!) Chapter review.

The first chapter said charm was eight, and then the second chapter said it was ten, but in chapter eight it was changed to six again,? ? ? ? If you can't remember the data, don't write it down.

Commentary on Chapter 43 [Old Mo Fang's eyes turned black] in "Witness Pangu's Creation of the Sky, I Evolved into a Fantasy World" written by Hua Blooming and Falling.

About the chapter "Da Ming: I, Emperor Zhu Di and grandson are so arrogant" written by Dream Unlimited 019 was given too little [Please give me flowers and vote for evaluation] Chapter review.

About Si Ye's book "Tanks extinguish fires, missiles detonate explosives, this is a rescue field" 14 Everyone stand up! ! Four words: Damn it! ! (Please add it to your collection) Chapter review.