Zongwu: I, the Prince of Ming Dynasty, Marry Yaoyue Lianxing

Kaido goes around trying to die because of his immortality, resulting in extremely high bounties and a tendency to leave people alone. As a bounty hunter, every time the protagonist is short of money, he exchanges Kaido and the navy for money, which makes the navy feel aggrieved and cannot deny the bounty.

This name makes people turn away at first sight. The name of the clan in the Ming Dynasty was not written like this.

The protagonist's name is wrong. He is neither a senior character nor a five-element radical. Bad review, **.

As we all know, Zhu Houzhao, Zhu Houcong, the five elements belong to fire. What is the name of your protagonist Zhu Zixuan? What the fuck? Where did your fire attribute go?

In the Ming Dynasty with the Yihua Palace, who is the leader of the Sun and Moon God Sect? Who is the elder of the Five Mountains Sword Sect? Are all the masters of good and evil together enough to kill the Grand Palace Master?

What kind of elephant skills does a dragon practice? You might as well just write about elephants

Shouldn't Zhu Houzhao's younger brother be called Zhu Houzhao?

They are trying to kidnap you morally. You are not very talkative and you will not refute.

With your name, it seems obvious that you are not a relative of Zhu Houzhao, brother.

After more than ten chapters, after watching the two plots of singing live in the ward and buying a piano to show off, I felt a little overwhelmed and had no choice. . .

Do you still need spiritual fruit elixirs to achieve true immortality during a saint's sermon? It's also **** enough

I just discovered the protagonist's halo, it's a takeover

Let's not talk about whether it is well written or not. There are only a few pictures when it is put on the shelf. Who will read this? At least add a few more chapters and bring people in. Will anyone read it at this update speed? The logic is unreasonable and too watery. The Songshan Sect and the Shaolin Temple dare to bully the current prince. Is it because these two sects are mentally retarded or the author is mentally retarded? Chaoting is the largest sect in the world.

Fw system fw protagonist

Can a person weighing tens of kilograms with high power bear your weight of 400 kilograms? Writing a book without thinking is a disease

Tell me when it will be updated to chapter 48 of the previous book.

At first glance, this name does not belong to Lao Zhu's family. The names of Zhu Yuanzhang's descendants all have the five elements, metal, wood, water, fire, and earth. Look at your name, which character has the five elements?

The first part was okay, but when I wrote about Grandpa Niu, it completely collapsed.

What is the name of Zhu Houzhao's younger brother? Zhu your grandma's legs

What are you writing? The personalities of many of the original characters are simply not right. Not to mention the character of Yao Yue Lianxing is not right at all. When Huang Rong first appeared on the scene and was still young, she was eccentric. Not only was she witty, but she was also good at playing tricks. As a result, At this point, apart from copying a few paragraphs of the original text, the rest is shock and shock. What the hell is this? A person who can't even control Huang Laoxie. Do you think Huang Rong will not use any tricks to trick the protagonist and Yao Yue Lianxing when she meets a mysterious person like the protagonist? Is it about identity? An old man like Hong Qigong was tricked by Huang Rong into using the Eighteen Palms of the Dragon. Even if the protagonist can't hide his identity, Huang Rong will definitely take action. It's impossible to get along indifferently. He was shocked when he saw their extraordinary features. I suggest that if you don't understand the personality characteristics of the original characters, don't write a fanfic. The martial arts of the protagonist is messed up anyway, so just write the original character. This fanfic does not write the personality characteristics of the original character, which really deducts points.

What should the main character of the Zhu family's ancestral training be called Zhu Hou? Lao Zhu gave the names of his descendants two and a half characters.

When the protagonist's internal strength was far inferior to that of Half-Step Heavenly Man before, he could instantly kill Half-Step Heavenly Man. Now, when your protagonist's internal strength reaches the same level as Zhu Wuwu's, they are evenly matched. It took more than ten chapters to kill Zhu Wuwu?

The content is getting more and more watery.

This kind of book comes out all the time. It's fine at first, but then it becomes another book.

Innocent, he is a modern person, Hu Bayi is in his 19s, how could they possibly meet each other?

我的评价是，不如抽干虚数内能天灾飞升，你才是真正的毁灭

The author adds this little bit in each chapter. How can it be enough? The pace is so slow. How can it be enough? Hurry up! Time is speeding up.

Now if the horns are replaced by scorpions, what will Nami do?

Is the person who the protagonist travels through and changes into the moon the First Emperor? Why isn't it in the shape of a giant moth? Why not open a Star Destroyer fleet?

So sweet! I haven't seen such a sweet article on Feilu for a long time! I am so blown away! The author is gkd!