Thanks for the Invite, I'm at Sea, and I Started Out with Accelerator

So speechless, the daughter of a small businessman from the East China Sea has become the richest man in the world. All kinds of forcible gifts

Accelerator is strong because he is Accelerator, not because he has the right amount of manipulation

You can't set it up, or there's a system or something.

This is written too casually. How could you say you are so beautiful when you meet someone for the first time, please be my woman! The key point is that I agreed, but there is no emotion at all. The heroine has no personality at all. She is just like a tool. Is it interesting to watch? There is no emotional line or interaction at all. It's so embarrassing to watch. This way, people will only read the free chapters and won't be in the mood to subscribe.

The best superpowers are telekinesis and supernatural abilities. Even if Accelerator's brain can be used by humans, it will become a computer without emotions.

Do you think he is okay? He must have killed an old cook who washed his hands in a golden basin. You could call him bad. He didn't take action against Sanji and even made a show of Itachi. Usually such things are simply called sick. . . Generally speaking, why are there so-called good guy templates, bad guy templates, and all kinds of messy templates? It is because of the need to distinguish readers. Good people have an audience, and bad people also have an audience. But if you write like this, I'm afraid the only audience is you. . . Take care of yourself. . .

The shortcomings of this book are that it is too easy to deduce, and the logic is somewhat illogical. It would be much better to discard some of the data in this book.

I don't know why there are so many bad things about it, but the author does have some shortcomings, especially in terms of abilities, which are too invincible, and the ability to awaken Devil Fruit abilities is too random. This aspect is too lame, and it really doesn't work. It's better not to spend too much time writing about abilities, and just write about the harem honestly.

It seems that the author has never read the original work. Vector operations require understanding and brain calculations to operate. Unless it is an optimized version, this ability is basically ineffective for ordinary people.

In other words, once there is hatred for the Draco, the gene that cannot harm the Draco will self-destruct. Anyway, it is best to change it, otherwise it will be a green dot.