One Piece Editing: Exposing the Battles Between Emperors Across the Ages

To be honest, as soon as the plot arrived in Wano Country and the plot related to Oden, it turned into a metaphysical case. Kaido gave Oden countless opportunities to run away, and Oden fought to the end. He refused to do anything, and no one screamed. In the end, Kaido returned the weapon to Oden, and locked him in a cage. There was no wound on his body. Such a good opportunity, with his family and weapons beside him and his teammates nearby, he might as well give the weapon to his wife and lead him to death himself. Where is Kaido drinking? He is still dying, not struggling at all, not caring about the future of the common people, the future of the country, the future of his subordinates, and the future of his family. He feels that there will be help from experts in 20 years. He should not be called Rayleigh Whitebeard. He is very hypocritical. It was the sword that Oden pulled, not Oden. Oden has strength but no brains. His father made a doll to curse Kaidosa to death. After 20 years, the outside world could not resist. Kaido revealed who he was after the death of the snake. My daughter has been a chicken for 20 years, and she can't get as much information as Robin in one night. Her talent can be ignored without training. It can be seen that he loves this profession when he puts Zoro to sleep. After Kaido's death, he didn't sing praises to Luffy and praise his father, emmm. Momonosuke has no spine. When he met his murderous father, The enemy is afraid, forget it, he surrendered to save his life when Luffy was fast, and he played house when others started a group, saying that he was Oden's son and heir, and he was the general of Wano Country.

Why do every pirate novel like this resurrect Roger, then save Ace, and then keep licking Luffy and the others? Do you like being a licker so much?

The Luffy you wrote is a bit off-putting.

Speaking of the peak battle, the small East China Sea experienced the dual battle between Bucky and Luffy. It was so spectacular that even the leader Ryu participated.

Will be weaker than the emperor, Otherwise, given Akainu's character, he would have pushed the Yonko over long ago.

You've been watching for nothing, the pirate king of the same level as the general and emperor.

The Bandit King and the King of the Offshore are almost enough, don't be awkward there, and if the red hair says the three scars are aching, just write Blackbeard. What magic weapon does Blackbeard have? What kind of special abilities are there? It's really embarrassing.

The dialogue made my head hurt, am I the same!

You are a guy who specializes in giving enemies abilities and you don't have any shitty abilities. This golden finger is nothing like that. And who is Luffy? He is the best member of the Hatters but he is also the most arrogant and a thief who will use his connections to cause trouble.

The introduction is so well written, but it's only five chapters long? Short and weak!