Detective Conan: I Transmigrated and Became the Biggest Mastermind

Is this emotional scene written enough? Who is this protagonist? Even if he is the heroine, there is no need to explain to her. I'm afraid she won't believe it. Are you the leader of Heaven or Xiaolan's unknown purchaser? And it's true that you, the author, can act like a pig. Arturia, Yakushiro Ryoko, and Akahitomi are worse than Ran. How can someone who has been in love with them all be like that? Forget it, the author doesn't write well like this. I don't feel very comfortable reading it.

All of your subordinates are so good at it. You want to get good grades in a book with a protagonist who has no ability at all. I really admire you. So many people are scolding you and you can still write it. With your IQ, you still write about the mastermind behind the scenes.

If the protagonist himself is not strengthened, he is really extremely poisonous, so I won't watch it.

Is it really not wise to bring a female companion to Xiaolan to get to know her? Why do you need to take someone with you? I don't understand. It brings nothing positive but is a waste of time. The first impression this gives people is not that this person has such a good-looking girlfriend and he comes to chat with other people. This is a normal world. How can Xiaolan have a good chat with the protagonist? Open the topic with a beautiful word. Hiss, why is this Xiaolan a bit weird? She didn't download Guo Jia Anti-Fraud APP at first glance.

Seeing that he went to the warehouse to save Mingmei before going to Baige, I felt that something was going to happen to Shiho. Then something really happened. It really made me laugh. Don't you have any idea of ​​what your identity is? Why not schedule both. And the mastermind behind the scenes. The protagonist is a character who only knows how to be astringent. Why not call life a harem system. It just happens to be a behind-the-scenes system. Then the protagonist is an intellectually disabled person. Just outrageous.

An intellectually disabled person who only knows how to make bubbles has no temperament as a behind-the-scenes boss. He is not worth subscribing to. Too bad.

Did the author use the following to write the book? The boss of the mysterious organization behind the scenes is attracting bees and butterflies everywhere to open up a harem? This is really low to the core of the earth, and all the strength has been lost. In addition, I am not saying that you can't have a harem, this is a question of whether the style is suitable. When writing about seekers, you have to have a Taoist companion, and at most two or three confidantes.

Stop writing it. You have written this protagonist useless. He can't walk when he sees a woman. His ability to summon so many powerful subordinates has not been strengthened. He is like a loser. Do you have masochistic tendencies? You are jealous at every turn. You are the mastermind behind the scenes. You have no character at all. Are you writing this to make people think? Ke Xuetong ranked the worst in the humanities, and yours is definitely in the top three.

Do you feel like the main character is useless? Is this the mastermind? Not to mention anything else, at least let the protagonist get some of the ability to summon characters. Otherwise, the protagonist in this writing will be so useless, relying on his subordinates for everything. Besides, doesn't the protagonist want to be the mastermind behind the scenes? Why do you make phone calls directly when contacting organization members?

You can't even satisfy women and you still have a harem. Let's just forget about it and don't strengthen it. That's awesome.