In a Crossover World: I Just Arrived in Japan, and I'm a Psychic

Can you please stop adding some random jokes in it? It seems boring and I don't have any intention to read the novel anymore.

Sabi, travel to the United States. I learned Japanese swordsmanship and still practice it there. How awesome. I'm speechless. My own people are always bragging about their famous swords. Just a broken one. Island country. Was sword craftsmanship secretly learned in the Tang Dynasty? Is it necessary to brag like this? And it's still there. Play the Japanese Bushido. As long as you ** can write better, you are always making a fool of yourself. You write directly. Swordsmanship, swordsmanship or martial arts are all forms of control over the body. Cleverly use 10% of the force to produce 100% of the effect.

I feel like the writing is a bit off. The protagonist is so high-level, and the result is a bit petty. For example, Nishimiya Glass spends so much space writing about such a small thing, whether it is simply punishing those people, or directly healing her, or becoming her light, it is enough, but it is very strange to describe how a bunch of those people messed with her. There is also Tomori Nao. This role may not be that high, but her share of the heroine is too high, and the other heroines have nothing to gain. His personality is also a bit strange. He is not that competitive. If it were simply to save the person with abilities or to catch up with the protagonist, it would be fine, but it is very awkward to portray him as if he is competing with the protagonist to win. Then there is the school plot. It may be more reliable to be the behind-the-scenes ** or the board of directors. The student union manages the college. In fact, Shinomiya Kaguya is more reliable to be the student union president. Yuri is unreliable in terms of ability and character. After watching it for so long, I almost thought Tomori Nao was the protagonist.

They don't match up with each other, and they don't know punctuation marks. How can they write a book? The courage is commendable.

I don't know what the purpose of adding that family of three is, besides making readers angry?

This book is almost out of date. You scolded me for that stuff before. Do you still want to read it???

**, You add your **, a family of three **.

Are you still in the second grade of middle school? If you just put it aside, you will really be embarrassed to death.

Living in Bengbu, Chapter 67 is so embarrassing

Some places are still inexplicably awkward. It is suddenly said that the male protagonist also has low self-esteem. There is no foreshadowing and it seems very strange. Write less embarrassing things.