This Commentator Talks So Fast, the Whole Internet Is Losing It!

The donkeys in the production team are not as diligent as you. They write so fast. Come on.

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Is the author unclean before? Please give me your online name and let me check it out.

I'm desperate for books. Let's help each other and leave your bookshelf. Deduct 1 and destroy 1.

The writing is good. I hope that the main character will not pursue a career in the future, but become an anchor and take care of girls. If it doesn't work, just write more about daily life. The career is too routine.

The author didn't write that he was going to play in the competition. He had a bad feeling about increasing proficiency or something.

If you go to play a game, there is no guarantee. If it is not as interesting as the previous ones, your book will fail, so I still hope the author will think clearly.

I should be participating in the competition soon. I would like to make some suggestions. I hope they will be useful to the author. 1. Don't win more than a dozen cards in a game. There are many books about LOL. When they write about the game, the protagonist does something, and then the opponent shocks the audience, shocks the explanation, and shocks the whole network. You can win two or three cards just by writing the reaction, which is awkward and boring. 2. Don't force the game to lose. If you can win the game 3:0, don't write it as 3:2. It's really unnecessary. Don't write the protagonist as the kind of jungler who will die as soon as he is caught. Maybe it can't be one against five in the game, but it can be done in the novel. 3. Don't write teammates and coaches as **brainless*. Some books are really right except for the names, but the characters are completely wrong, which seriously affects the perception. And to be honest, you can make the protagonist both a player and a coach. One person can get two salaries, which also saves a lot of things. 4. Since the protagonist can play in all five positions, it's better to find a team that can shake it up. This will be more interesting.

Seriously, it's beautifully written. All kinds of analysis and so on, but driving is too fake! Regardless of whether the bag is washed away now or before! After all, the mothers of some children are very capable in fighting!

Damn, you're such a talented person, you're going to die for me, you're making me laugh to death