
Pokemon Era: Using a Handheld to Hunt Shinies
精灵时代:我用掌机开始刷闪
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
665Chapters
15.3MReads
920.2kFlowers
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Shen Nong is here. When I see Chapter 200, I'll just say it. It's useless. The person looked the same before it was released. After it is released, especially after Chapter 200, lj is a mess. If you look at it after it is released, you will see these things: full level 100, level 50 red flame pine, level 50 senior, level 60 or 70 mythical beast, level 80 gym main force, The ninety-level teacher is not the main force, and the combat power system is a piece of shit. Secondly, more than 70% of the book is about games. In reality, there is nothing written about it. A B breeding house lasted two hundred chapters. The more you write, the more perfunctory you are. It is a waste of money and energy. The more you write, the worse it becomes. This book is useless. There is no need to waste time.
I forgot about everything before, but you are still feeding me shit. The female Elledo really has yours. Are you crazy or am I crazy? Sister Huan Sa, I think you are a good character, with combat power, mythical beasts, plot, proportion, everything I can do, but if you give me four times the entire super power to restrain Ghost Stone, and the female evolved Eluledor, I really can't help it, at least let's see if Shen Bai can do it?
The combat power has begun to collapse. When the protagonist hits the Baby Cup, a senior who is over 50 levels out of the first-year team will appear. In a slightly higher level competition, will there be a bunch of gym kings who are 60 or 70 levels, or even a bunch of 70 or 80-level king champions? According to the author's setting, the gym leader is already considered a character, right? A college graduate who has just graduated for more than a year is about to catch up with the gym. Is this a reasonable setting? In the later stage, there will be kings everywhere, right? If you can't control your fighting power, you can have fewer battles. Let the protagonist first build the Pokémon breeding house that he has been talking about for so long. Write about starting a business. Let the protagonist pretend to be awesome with rare Pokémon. In the middle, intersperse some plots such as competitions and games. Pokémon The cool thing about Dream Fandom is not just the battles. The protagonist can use the breeding house and the energy cube as a starting point to develop some of his own business power and get some background for himself to prepare for successfully reaching a high position in the future. Isn't it better than just writing the battle now?
Level 60 Gym Leader. Any genius who is one year out of college is over level 50, and is probably less than 25 years old. Then the middle-aged geniuses are not average per capita, so why do passers-by upgrade so quickly? In the later stage, I am afraid that there will not be as many kings as *.
But if the protagonist and the protagonist like you find a pair of biological sisters to be women, why don't you want a female protagonist?
The more you go back, the more speechless you get. The protagonist has a golden finger and he levels up every day in the game. He even defeated the red flame pine. However, a teacher who is not the main elf beat the protagonist's entire main lineup. It made me laugh. You got a golden finger and you are lonely. After maxing out the level in the game every day, the result is only slightly better than your classmates. If you pick any young teacher in real life, he can beat the protagonist without swiping. He has not touched any mythical beasts. The red flame pine is level 50, and the real teacher is level 90. Just like this, this **teacher** is still facing the illusion of the red flame pine. Do you want to look back and see what you are writing?
I liked this book very much at the beginning. I read it at the end of October and I liked it very much. I even tried to persuade others when the book started to collapse. However, this book kept exhausting my patience and I refused to listen to rational criticisms, so forget it. Now the author can't even guarantee updates, it's just a crappy book. In this case, I will no longer pay attention to this book. You love it to death and will disappear from my bookshelf forever. In just two months, this book has completely worn away my remaining patience. It is just another useless bad book.
I admit that Red Flame Pine is indeed a plot setting, but what next? Is the biggest question in this article just the red flame pine? Isn't it the collapse of combat power and the author's stubbornness? As for the *fucking breath of life you are talking about, the 200 chapters of Emerald were not finished in one week and the plot of Goba Game with dozens of chapters is the breath of life you want? You said the pace is slow, right? In the early stage, the protagonist upgraded quickly and the whole invincible novel felt like it was suppressed hard in the later stage? To put it bluntly, it's a series of breakdowns in combat power caused by the author's lack of writing skills and the protagonist's upgrading too quickly. Do you believe it? Chapter 100 of the protagonist has passed, but the main pet is still level 60. The Bulbasaur I just received has reached level 50 in less than ten chapters. The two I conquered are level 70 and have not been promoted. When I saw the 70 level of Gyarados and Dark Demon when I beat the teacher, I wanted to laugh. In the first few chapters, it was difficult to beat the gym leader. In the next few chapters, the senior who challenged the king was killed directly. The teacher directly took out the second team to beat the mythical beast. That team should be level 100.
In reality, there are some Sabi plots from time to time. I think there are many readers, so some of them need to be filtered, right?
It's quite normal to have a harem in Feilu, right? Although there is basically no interaction, it would be too much to allocate Min Rou to lick*. . .