
Playing Dante from the Start, Guiding the Crossover Trials
开局扮演但丁,指点综漫试炼
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 759k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
223Chapters
5.1MReads
199.4kFlowers
10.0Score
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A few people from Xiaotian represent billions of people around the world. Does Xiaotian match up? Can't we just add some anime characters from other countries?
What's wrong? If you guessed the identity but didn't get it right, you might as well not guess. Besides, there are so many powerful people in the real world. If you just look up the GGO champion, wouldn't you be able to easily identify the protagonist? At that time, the protagonist didn't have a system. He just hid the identity of the protagonist for various reasons. He took action on the spot without revealing his identity to the girls present. That was no different from not showing up. Let me say it again, now the protagonist's information should not be a secret among those big shots, but it is still secretive, is it necessary? I don't want you to let the protagonist end now, and no one with any intelligence will think that the ebony and white ivory in the protagonist's hand are ordinary pistols. Can ordinary pistols shoot so many rounds of bullets?! It's so funny. I really tried to lower the IQ of the girls in the book. It was originally well written, but this new chapter pissed me off. It's urgent to change it now, otherwise I feel like you will lose a lot of readers.
Got it! Everyone in the book is an egomaniac! Everyone is talking out of their minds! How dare you, an ordinary person, talk about the bloodline of a powerful person? What's even more amazing is that several female characters discuss it in front of the protagonist! There are very few normal people in the whole book! They all have no life experience, no IQ, and no emotional intelligence!
But the writing is worse than the national destiny
I suggest you change Chapter 28. It's so obvious and you have to forcefully deny your identity. It's really uncomfortable to watch.
A group of ordinary people without special powers laugh at people with extraordinary powers and are not afraid of their world being invaded.
Water! Just hard water! It also contains the kind of explosive coins!
This fight should have been filled with passion, but you poured water into it. No matter how great the enthusiasm was, you extinguished it!
That Yan Mo Sword uses the Breath of Thunder. It's so low. It's not like he doesn't know how to dimensional slash. It feels like a college student showing off addition, subtraction, multiplication and division in front of kindergarten students, and he's very proud of it.
The big ones are all gone. Before, it was barely acceptable to use demon chess pieces to open a real demon. Now, materials from a world like Demon Slayer, where martial arts are not very strong, can actually be used as the scabbard of the En Demon Sword. It's also made to look like an artifact. Not to mention how to learn *fart breathing.