
In an Anime Crossover: I Play Asakura Hao from the Start!
人在综漫:开局扮演麻仓叶王!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 484k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
192Chapters
2.4MReads
117kFlowers
10.0Score
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Ibaraki Douji has laid the groundwork for many chapters and the result is this? Retreat? Run away without a fight? Do you have to wait until other people are harmed before you are willing to fight? Isn't it good to fight in this Yin Yang Hall? So many Onmyoji might not be able to help much, but wouldn't it be enough to set up a barrier to block the aftermath and prevent it from escaping? When King Ye was in his heyday, the star exploded, and more than 40% of his strength was definitely enough to clean up the sector. Ibaraki Doji probably only wiped out the city in its heyday, let alone not fully recovered. Can't the protagonist easily defeat it and destroy it? I finally thought that I was about to enter the Xiao Gaochao plot and the protagonist was ready to show his strength, but you told me that if I let it go, it would have to water again? You can't write a good plot, do you just want the water to become a sea?
The first is the protagonist. Even if you delete the protagonist, it will not affect the story. After reading it, it's as if you haven't read it, the whole Chelulu story. You can see it, but it doesn't look good. No story telling
Is there a possibility that Shizuka Hiratsuka's surname is Hiratsuka and his first name is Shizu. Instead of the surname Ping. It really doesn't matter if the protagonist's name is not related to Shizuka Hiratsuka, but when it comes to the relationship, it's nonsense!
Your appearance is so ugly. You can't even count the number of words like this. One thing can go from seventy to ninety chapters, and you can't even see the protagonist in three or four chapters. When you see the protagonist in one chapter, you only have two or three sentences about the protagonist. It's so cool.
Why does it look so similar to the previous book about Qingming? In the back of that book, the supporting characters all regarded the protagonist as Qingming. What's even more ridiculous is that the author actually wrote the protagonist as the reincarnation of Qingming.
Just one Ye Wang template has made tens of millions of people, and it is 100% guaranteed, and another template will come, etc., You can directly continue to enhance the template based on the original 100% and then 2300%. If you want to add additional abilities, you can reward the card with the ability after use. Too many abilities and too complicated will not look good.
This protagonist is not at all like Asakura Ye-oh, nor is he like Asakura's childhood character. He is similar in that he is good at picking up conversations. I think the role of eliminating supernatural beings is at most 50%, because playing a person's power cannot be everything. The remaining 50% also includes behavioral preferences and ideals. Otherwise, it will be stealing the power system instead of playing the system. Moreover, King Ye essentially loves the world. His mother was killed because of his power, and his heart was full of loneliness and sadness, so he neglected the wavelength of his mother's soul, so he wanted to create a world that would not discriminate against him and psychics. This is the motivation for him to be reincarnated even if he is constantly being killed, so the protagonist will never reach full performance. The protagonist does not have this life experience and obsession.
Also, I couldn't understand the repeated guessing of identities and origins. There were only three or five identities that could be guessed. So did Onmyoji have to guess the later stages?
The writing is messy, intermittently written, and there is a little bit of rambling here and there, and there is nothing interesting about it. You said that the protagonist is so strong, but he did nothing, he just watched. Others know that the protagonist is very strong, but it's hard to say where he is strong.
The same author is no longer around. No wonder the sense of déjà vu is so strong. The more I read it, the more it resembles Qingming's book. I think everyone can run away. It looks like the situation will be the same as the previous one, but it will be reincarnated again. In the end, the writing will be unfinished.