Athena from the Start: A Sanctuary on the Grand Line

What a dimensionality reduction blow. What's the difference between a Saint Seiya fighting a newborn baby and a UFC heavyweight champion beating a newborn baby?

Looking at the introduction, you can tell that it is weakened, and the Yonko still wants the Golden Saint to use AE. A piece of bronze can pierce a pirate

Change the title or introduction of your book, otherwise most people will lose interest as soon as they see the title of your book. After all, you are the bankrupt version of Athena and Saint Seiya.

Let the author understand the combat power of Saint Seiya before talking about it.

It feels like just one gold can defeat the pirates.

A good sanctuary, but a pirate group?? Being a thief? Not cool at all

The Holy Land is the Holy Land. Why must we write about the Pirates? Originally, the duty of the Saints is to protect the earth. You and the entire pirate team look weird.

In fact, I think the Bronze Saints can beat the Yonko. The Gold Saints can somewhat bully the pirate world by beating the Yonko. The Gold Saints can make the world of Pirates famous.

I don't even dare to glance at the text after reading this introduction.

There are less than 100,000 words, and I have just opened the book. Do you want us to support it or not?